July 11, 2024
Anhui Province
Anhui is a province located in the eastern central region of China. It borders Jiangsu Province to the east, Shandong Province to the northeast, Henan Province to the northwest, Hubei Province to the west, Jiangxi Province to the south, and Zhejiang Province to the southeast.
Anhui occupies an area resembling a rectangle from south to north and is divided into three parts by the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River.
The area south of the Yangtze River is mountainous, the area between the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River is hilly, and the area north of the Huaihe River is a vast plain.
The capital of Anhui Province is Hefei, which is situated in the center of Anhui between the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River.
The abbreviation of Anhui is 皖 (Wǎn). We often say south Wan, central Wan, and north Wan to refer to the aforementioned three parts.
The most beautiful tourist spots are concentrated in south Wan, such as the Huangshan Mountains, the Jiuhua Mountains, the Taiping Lake, and the ancient Hongcun Village.
Central Wan also has a few mountains, namely the Dabie Mountains, the Tianzhu Mountains, and the Langya Mountains. Langya Mountain is a 5A-level tourist spot, as well as Tiantangzhai in Dabie Mountain.
My city is in north Wan, where it is mostly farmland. The sole 5A-level tourist spot is Balihe Park in Yingshang County, near the Huaihe River.
The renowned university in Anhui Province is the University of Science and Technology of China, abbreviated as USTC. It is ranked seventh among Chinese universities this year.
Compared with developed provinces such as Guangdong, Zhejiang, Jiangsu, and Shandong, Anhui is still in the process of development. Among all the provinces in China, it might occupy a position above the average. Its GDP last year was 4,705 billion, ranking 11th among 4 municipalities, 5 autonomous regions, and 23 provinces.
Anhui Province
Anhui is a province located in the eastern central region of China.
It borders Jiangsu Province to the east, Shandong Province to the northeast, Henan Province to the northwest, Hubei Province to the west, Jiangxi Province to the south, and Zhejiang Province to the southeast.
Anhui occupies an area resembling a rectangle from south to north and is divided into three parts by the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River.
The area south of the Yangtze River is mountainous, the area between the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River is hilly, and the area north of the Huaihe River is a vast plain.
The capital of Anhui Province is Hefei, which is situated in the center of Anhui between the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River.
The abbreviation of Anhui is 皖 (Wǎn).
We often say south Wan, central Wan, and north Wan to refer to the aforementioned three parts.
The most beautiful tourist spots are concentrated in south Wan, such as the Huangshan Mountains, the Jiuhua Mountains, the Taiping Lake, and the ancient Hongcun Village.
Central Wan also has a few mountains, namely the Dabie Mountains, the Tianzhu Mountains, and the Langya Mountains.
Langya Mountain is a 5A-level tourist spot, as well as Tiantangzhai in Dabie Mountain.
My city is in north Wan, where it is mostly farmland.
The sole 5A-level tourist spot is Balihe Park in Yingshang County, near the Huaihe River.
The renowned university in Anhui Province is the University of Science and Technology of China, abbreviated as USTC.
It is ranked seventh among Chinese universities this year.
Compared with developed provinces such as Guangdong, Zhejiang, Jiangsu, and Shandong, Anhui is still in the process of development.
AmongCompared to all other provinces in China, it might occupy a position above the average.
This sentence is technically correct. However, it might sound more concise to end the sentence with, "..., it is probably above-average." instead of "it might occupy a position above the average."
It is better to start the sentence saying "Compared to..." rather than "Among..." because you are talking about a supposed average - and an average is only ever determined relative to other items, so a comparison has to be made.
Its GDP last year was 4,705 billion, ranking 11th among 4 municipalities, 5 autonomous regions, and 23 provinces.
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Anhui occupies an area resembling a rectangle from south to north and is divided into three parts by the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The capital of Anhui Province is Hefei, which is situated in the center of Anhui between the Yangtze River and the Huaihe River. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The abbreviation of Anhui is 皖 (Wǎn). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We often say south Wan, central Wan, and north Wan to refer to the aforementioned three parts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The most beautiful tourist spots are concentrated in south Wan, such as the Huangshan Mountains, the Jiuhua Mountains, the Taiping Lake, and the ancient Hongcun Village. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Central Wan also has a few mountains, namely the Dabie Mountains, the Tianzhu Mountains, and the Langya Mountains. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Langya Mountain is a 5A-level tourist spot, as well as Tiantangzhai in Dabie Mountain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My city is in north Wan, where it is mostly farmland. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The sole 5A-level tourist spot is Balihe Park in Yingshang County, near the Huaihe River. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The renowned university in Anhui Province is the University of Science and Technology of China, abbreviated as USTC. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is ranked seventh among Chinese universities this year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Compared with developed provinces such as Guangdong, Zhejiang, Jiangsu, and Shandong, Anhui is still in the process of development. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Among all the provinces in China, it might occupy a position above the average.
This sentence is technically correct. However, it might sound more concise to end the sentence with, "..., it is probably above-average." instead of "it might occupy a position above the average." It is better to start the sentence saying "Compared to..." rather than "Among..." because you are talking about a supposed average - and an average is only ever determined relative to other items, so a comparison has to be made. |
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Its GDP last year was 4,705 billion, ranking 11th among 4 municipalities, 5 autonomous regions, and 23 provinces. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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