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Tammy

March 5, 2025

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Angry

I'm feeling angry right now.

I've just finished an online group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago. The teacher not only compressed my speaking time, but also put me last to speak every time.

I'm certain it wasn't personal since it was our first meeting. So probably, I met a racist.

I'm going to jog and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

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Angry

I'm feeling angry right now.

I've just finished an online group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

"on a platform" is a bit unnecessary, there's no reason to introduce it if you don't specify what platform.

The teacher not only compressed my speaking time, but also put me last to speak every time.

I'm certain it wasn't personal since ithis was ourthe first meetingtime I was in this teacher's class.

So I've probably, I met ran into a racist.

So I probably met a racist 可以, this word order is better

I'm going to jog now and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

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Since you said this is the first time you were in this teacher's class, is it possible that's why? Especially if other people have taken the class before. The teacher might think you're not used to this and wouldn't want to force you to speak a lot or wouldn't want you to feel uncomfortable speaking before you've heard other speak. As an introvert I would appreciate this. Also they might be thinking you're shy because you're Asian - a racial stereotype, but not exactly malicious.

It could be that the teacher does hate you. But there are other reasons to hate people besides race. I hate people of all races!

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Tammy

March 10, 2025

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Thank you for the corrections and nice perspective!

Have a nice day!

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amber28

March 11, 2025

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Haha "nice perspective" when I said I hate people of all races lol

I'm feeling angry right now.

I'veALSO POSSIBLE: I just finished an online group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

OPTION A: The teacher not only compressedut my speaking time down, but also putcalled me last to speak every timeduring discussions.¶
OPTION B: The teacher not only cut me off when speaking, but consistently called me last to speak
.

OPTION B is smoother, but OPTION A is also possible.

I'mALSO POSSIBLE: I feel certain it wasn't personal since it was our first meeting.

So probably, I met aMOOTHER: Probably the teacher was racist.¶
ALSO POSSIBLE: Perhaps the teacher was
racist.?

也有可能: I'm going to jog and if I'm still feel angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

Feedback

Sorry it did not work out well for you, Tammy. Hope you have a better experience with another teacher.

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Tammy

March 10, 2025

1

Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

The teacher not only compresslimited my speaking time, but also put me last to speak every time.

So i probably, I met a racist.

Based on your grammar and level, I'm sure the teacher thought you were better than the other students and was pushing for them to have an opportunity.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

I'm sorry to hear that, i hope you get to make the most of your money's worth! Language classes are expensive.

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Tammy

March 10, 2025

1

Thank you so much!

You are so lovely and kind. Have a nice day!

Angry

I'm feeling angry right now.

I've just finished an online group English speaking class {on a platform} a few minutes ago.

“On a platform” sounds unnatural. I would recommend either deleting it or naming the platform.

The teacher not only compressed mygave me less speaking time, but also put me last to speak than average, but also called on me last every time.

“Put me last to speak” sounds like he made a written schedule and your speaking slot was last.

I'm certain it wasn't personal since it was ourthe first meetingtime we’d met.

So I probably, I met a racist.

I'm going (out) to jog and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

Feedback

That does sound disappointing. Were you the only Asian person in the class?

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Tammy

March 6, 2025

1

Thanks a lot!

And yes, I was the only Asian person in the class.

Angry

I'm feelingvery angry right now.

Feeling angry doesn't sound natural.

I've just finished an online group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

The teacher not only compressed my speaking time, but also put me lastmakes me to speak last every time.

I'm certain it wasn't personal since it was our first meeting.

So I probably, I met a racist.

More natural

I'm going to jog and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgustannoying to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

Or annoying

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If it occurs every time, it is best to file a complaint. Please don't be angry for the whole day, it is not good for the body 🙏🏾.

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Tammy

March 6, 2025

1

是的,谢谢你!

跑步的时候我就放下了😄

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Toluwani

March 6, 2025

1

不客气~

那就好了😄

Angry

I'm feeling angry right now.

I've just finished an on-line group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

The teacher not only compressed my speaking time, but also putcalled on me last to speak every time.

I'm certain it wasn't personal since it was our first meeting.

So I probably, I met a racist.

I'm going tofor a jog and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

Feedback

Well written. Maybe you don't need his classes anyway! It sounds like an unfortunate experience - I hope your jog helps you feel better.

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Tammy

March 6, 2025

1

Thank you so much!

The jog helped a lot.

I've just finished an online group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

I've just finished an online English-speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

The teacher not only compressed my speaking time, but also put me last to speak every time.

The teacher not only reduced my speaking time, but also put me last to speak every time.

I'm certain it wasn't personal since it was our first meeting.

So probably, I met a racist.

So I probably met a racist.

I'm going to jog and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

I'm going to go for a job and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.

It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.

Feedback

Just a few minor tweaks here and there to improve clarity. Best of luck with the run!

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Tammy

March 6, 2025

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Thanks a lot!

Have a good day!

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“On a platform” sounds unnatural. I would recommend either deleting it or naming the platform.

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I've just finished an online group English speaking class on a platform a few minutes ago.

"on a platform" is a bit unnecessary, there's no reason to introduce it if you don't specify what platform.

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“Put me last to speak” sounds like he made a written schedule and your speaking slot was last.

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OPTION A: The teacher not only compressedut my speaking time down, but also putcalled me last to speak every timeduring discussions.¶
OPTION B: The teacher not only cut me off when speaking, but consistently called me last to speak
.

OPTION B is smoother, but OPTION A is also possible.

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I'm certain it wasn't personal since it was our first meeting.


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So probably, I met a racist.


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Based on your grammar and level, I'm sure the teacher thought you were better than the other students and was pushing for them to have an opportunity.

So probably, I met aMOOTHER: Probably the teacher was racist.¶
ALSO POSSIBLE: Perhaps the teacher was
racist.?

So I've probably, I met ran into a racist.

So I probably met a racist 可以, this word order is better

I'm going to jog and if I'm still angry after that, I will file an online complaint against that teacher.


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It's disgusting to pay for a class and have this happen to you.


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I'm sorry to hear that, i hope you get to make the most of your money's worth! Language classes are expensive.

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