Jan. 5, 2022
An Very Interestic Paint
One of my prefer artists is Van Gogh. I like very much how he works the color and strokes. But today I want coment about an incredible paint of a Dutch painter, too. His name is Jheronimus Bosch and is knowed by theirs fantastic and surrealistic paints. One of his more famous work is "The Garden of Earthly Delights". I can sure that it is also a delight to the sight. This job is a triptych done on wood and painted in oil. The left panel depict the Garden of Eden, in centre represent the lust and sin, and in the last and more dark panel, he show us about the Last Judgment. This paint always it has impressed me because it has a surrealistic o even futuristic style. It seems a paint avanced in their time.
An Very Interesticng Painting
One of my preferred artists is Van Gogh.
I like very muchreally like how he works with the color and strokes.
But todayToday, however, I want comment about aon incredible paint ofing by a Dutch painter, too.
Usually do not start sentence with "and" or "but"
His name is Jheronimus Bosch and is knowed by theirn for his fantastic and surrealistic paintings.
Can be: "renowned for"/ "famous for" instead of "known for"
One of his more famous works is "The Garden of Earthly Delights"."
I can sure that it is also a delight to the sightsee.
The left panel depicts the Garden of Eden, inthe centre represent thes lust and sin, and in the last and more darker panel, he shows us about the Last Judgment.
This paint always it haing has always impressed me because it has a surrealistic or even futuristic style.
It seems like a painting advanced in theirfor its time.
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Flows really well.
Jan. 7, 2022
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One of his more famous works is "The Garden of Earthly Delights".
I can assure you that it is also a delight to the sight sight to behold.
This jobwork is a triptych done on wood and painted in, painted on wood with oils.
The left panel depicts the Garden of Eden, inthe centre represent thes lust and sin, and in the last and more darker panel, he show us aboutdepicts the Last Judgment.
triptych is a term few would be able to understand though technically correct. You could write 'The painting is divided into three parts/tiles'
This paint always it haing has always impressed me because it has a surrealistic o, even futuristic, style.
It seems to be a paint avanced in theiring made ahead of it's time.
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Well done! I'm always happy to see the word triptych. :) Watch out for starting a sentence with 'But'. Only top novelists can get away with it.
Jan. 7, 2022
Thanks for your interesting feddbacks.
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But today I want coment about an incredible paint of a Dutch painter, too.
Don't start a sentence with 'But' The same goes for starting a sentence with 'And', always use a comma instead or start the sentence in a different way.
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This job is a triptych done on wood and painted in oil. This |
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The left panel depict the Garden of Eden, in centre represent the lust and sin, and in the last and more dark panel, he show us about the Last Judgment. The left panel depicts the Garden of Eden, triptych is a term few would be able to understand though technically correct. You could write 'The painting is divided into three parts/tiles' The left panel depicts the Garden of Eden, |
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