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July 17, 2024

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An Ordinary Day 1

In the summer, i always get up too late from 8 a.m to 10 a.m. Whenever like that, i feel don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework. My day after getting up is so tired of doing anything. I'm bored, feel lost and sometimes just want to vanish from the world.

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In the summer, iI always get up toovery late, from 8 a.mAM to 10 a.mAM.

Whenever like that, i feelthat happens, I don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.

My day aAfter getting up is so, I get tired of doing anything.

I'm bored, and feel lost and s. Sometimes, I just want to vanish from the world.

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I hope you feel better.

InDuring the summer, iI always get up too late, from 8 a.m to 10 a.m.

When you use "during," you're emphasizing the action or what happened. When you use "in", you're emphasizing when something happened.

Whenever like thatthat happens, iI feel like I don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.

We usually don't use articles in front of "social media"

My day after getting up is so tired of doinging that I don't want to do anything.

Not sure what you mean

I'm bored, feel lost, and sometimes just want to vanish from the world.

InDuring the summer, iI always get up too late from. I wake up around 8 a.m to 10 a.m.

The pronoun "I" is always capitalized in English.

Whenever likeI do that, iI feel I don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.

My day after getting up is so tired ofing from doing aneverything.

I don't really know what you're shooting for here.

I'm bored,always bored and I feel lost and s. Sometimes I just want to vanish from the world.

Me too, I don't want to be here either.

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Great writing! Keep it up!

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Arthur123

July 17, 2024

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Thanks for your feedback

An Ordinary Day 1


In the summer, i always get up too late from 8 a.m to 10 a.m.


InDuring the summer, iI always get up too late from. I wake up around 8 a.m to 10 a.m.

The pronoun "I" is always capitalized in English.

InDuring the summer, iI always get up too late, from 8 a.m to 10 a.m.

When you use "during," you're emphasizing the action or what happened. When you use "in", you're emphasizing when something happened.

In the summer, iI always get up toovery late, from 8 a.mAM to 10 a.mAM.

Whenever like that, i feel don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.


Whenever likeI do that, iI feel I don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.

Whenever like thatthat happens, iI feel like I don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.

We usually don't use articles in front of "social media"

Whenever like that, i feelthat happens, I don't want to do anything and just scroll the social media until my mother scolds me to get up and do housework.

My day after getting up is so tired of doing anything.


My day after getting up is so tired ofing from doing aneverything.

I don't really know what you're shooting for here.

My day after getting up is so tired of doinging that I don't want to do anything.

Not sure what you mean

My day aAfter getting up is so, I get tired of doing anything.

I'm bored, feel lost and sometimes just want to vanish from the world.


I'm bored,always bored and I feel lost and s. Sometimes I just want to vanish from the world.

Me too, I don't want to be here either.

I'm bored, feel lost, and sometimes just want to vanish from the world.

I'm bored, and feel lost and s. Sometimes, I just want to vanish from the world.

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