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An Old House With a Massive Tree (104)

There's an old Japanese house in the north part of my town.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's a huge tree in the garden.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and designated as a natural treasure in my town.

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.

I think it means "maternal instincts."

You can watch it on Netflix.

The main characters are relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.


私の町の北の方にとても古い家があります。

そこにはだれも住んでいませんが、平山さんという隣に住んでいる人のものです。

その家は典型的な日本の家で、それに加えて庭に大きな木があります。

その木は樹齢1000年と言われていて、町の天然記念物に指定されています。

2022年に「母性」という映画がそこで撮影されました。

その意味はmaternal instincts だと思います。

それはネットフリックスで見れます。

メインキャラクターは比較的人気の戸田恵梨香と長野明です。

その話は面白いですが、厳密には楽しい話ではありません。

でも、少なくてもその美しい庭と家が見れます。

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An Old House With a Massive Tree

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next doorALSO POSSIBLE: It is now deserted, but it belongs to my next door neighbor, Mr. Hirayama.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's with a huge tree in the garden.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and designated as a natural treasure in my town.

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.

I think it meanALSO POSSIBLE: I think it could be translated as "maternal instincts."

ALSO POSSIBLE: You can watch ithis film on Netflix.

The main characters are relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.

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Thanks for sharing this.

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sachisachi

Dec. 2, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

An Old House With a Massive Tree

There's an old Japanese house in the north part of my town.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's a huge tree in the garden.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and designated as a natural treasure in my town.

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.

I think it means "maternal instincts."

You can watch it on Netflix.

The main characters are relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.

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sachisachi

Dec. 2, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

An Old House With a Massive Tree

There's an old Japanese house in the northern part of my town.

"north part" is okay, I think many native speakers would say it this way.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives in the house next door to it.

The grammar here is perfect.

But, you may want to specify if:

① Hirayama-san lives next door to you, か
② Hirayama-san lives next door to the old house

The house is a typical Japanese house, along withnd there's a huge tree in the garden.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and is designated as a natural treasure in my town.

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.

I think it means "maternal instincts."

You can watch it on Netflix.

The main characters are played by the relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.

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Really great post sachisachiさん

That's cool about the movie!

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sachisachi

Dec. 1, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!
You are right. I wanted to write "It belongs to Mr. Hirayama who lives next door to the old house."

An Old House With a Massive Tree

There's an old Japanese house in the north part of my town.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door to me.

It's a little unclear whether you mean "next door to the house" or "next door to me." I think you mean "next door to me." I would add "to me" after "lives next door" just to make your sentence more clear.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along withnd there's a huge tree in the garden as well.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and is designated as a natural treasure in my town.

"Natural monument" is another word you can use besides "natural treasure."

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.

I think it"bosei" means "maternal instincts."

I think 母性本能 means "maternal instincts," and 母性 just means "maternity" or "motherhood." It seems that the English movie title is "Motherhood."

You can watch it on Netflix.

The main characters are played by relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.

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Sounds like an amazing house and tree!

Just curious, why does your neighbor own the house even though he doesn't live there?

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sachisachi

Dec. 1, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!
The person who own the house lives next to the old house. So I should've written "It belongs to Mr. Hirayama who lives next door to the house."
Maybe, it's his parents' house or his ground parents' house. and thank you for the word "motherhood". You are right the title is "Motherhood", but when I googled there were two Japanese movies that have the same title. What I talked about is the one the two main characters in the movie poster.

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Ashitaka

Dec. 2, 2024

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Oh I see!! "It belongs to Mr. Hirayama who lives next door to the house" sounds perfect.

I think you said you can see the house and garden in the movie? 😲

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sachisachi

Dec. 2, 2024

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Yes, you can see the house and the garden in the movie. I wrote about it in Japanese, but I don't know why I forgot to write it in English😅

An Old House With a Massive Tree

There's an old Japanese house in the north part of my town.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door.

I assume you mean he lives next door to the house, not next door to you.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along withnd there's a huge tree in the garden.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and is designated as a natural treasure inof my town.

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.

I think it means "maternal instincts."

You can watch it on Netflix.

The main characters are (played by two) relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.

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sachisachi

Dec. 1, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

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sachisachi

Dec. 1, 2024

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I assume you mean he lives next door to the house, not next door to you. ← Yes, I wanted to say "It belongs to Mr. Hirayama who lives next door to the old house."

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JoeTofu

Dec. 2, 2024

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There's an old Japanese house in the north part of my town.


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Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door.


Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door.

I assume you mean he lives next door to the house, not next door to you.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door to me.

It's a little unclear whether you mean "next door to the house" or "next door to me." I think you mean "next door to me." I would add "to me" after "lives next door" just to make your sentence more clear.

Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives in the house next door to it.

The grammar here is perfect. But, you may want to specify if: ① Hirayama-san lives next door to you, か ② Hirayama-san lives next door to the old house

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Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next doorALSO POSSIBLE: It is now deserted, but it belongs to my next door neighbor, Mr. Hirayama.

In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.


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The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's a huge tree in the garden.


The house is a typical Japanese house, along withnd there's a huge tree in the garden.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along withnd there's a huge tree in the garden as well.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along withnd there's a huge tree in the garden.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's a huge tree in the garden.

The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's with a huge tree in the garden.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and designated as a natural treasure in my town.


It is said to be around 1000 years old and is designated as a natural treasure inof my town.

It is said to be around 1000 years old and is designated as a natural treasure in my town.

"Natural monument" is another word you can use besides "natural treasure."

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I think it means "maternal instincts."


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I think it"bosei" means "maternal instincts."

I think 母性本能 means "maternal instincts," and 母性 just means "maternity" or "motherhood." It seems that the English movie title is "Motherhood."

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I think it meanALSO POSSIBLE: I think it could be translated as "maternal instincts."

You can watch it on Netflix.


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ALSO POSSIBLE: You can watch ithis film on Netflix.

The main characters are relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.


The main characters are (played by two) relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.

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An Old House With a Massive Tree (104)


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