May 2, 2022
An Old Fruit Shop
Near home there are a lovely and old vegetable fruit shop. The several fruits are placed in a perfect order in theirs wooden boxes. In the middle of each box the seller put a black sign with the price written with a white chalk. The price is written in kg, for example, the tomatoes are sold at 2,80€/kg. But the avocado is sold by pieces, for instance 2,50€/each. Out of curiosity, the shop has put in the walls a placards with the text "Not touch", so all you want to buy, you must ask to the shop assistent. The shop sells a lot productes "de proximitat", that means the product is cultivated not very far from Barcelona. The artichokes come from close crop, and the oranges are harvest from two hundred and fifty km away. In the last century, all the fruit shops was as this, but today, most people go to buy the fruit at the supermarket.
An Old Fruit Shop
Near home there areis a lovely and old vegetable and fruit shop.
The several fruits are placed in a perfect order in theirs wooden boxes.
In the middle of each box the seller put a black sign with the price written with a white chalk.
The price is written in kg, for example, the tomatoes are sold at 2,80€/kg.
But the avocado is sold by pieces, for instance 2,50€/each.
Out of curiosity, the shop has put in the walls a placards with the text "NDo not touch", so allfor everything you want to buy, you must ask to the shop assistent.
The shop sells a lot productes "de proximitat", thatwhich means the product is cultivated not very far from Barcelona.
The artichokes come from closea nearby crop, and the oranges are harvest from two hundred and fifty kmilometres away.
"km" is used on signs, but it's usually spelled out in sentences.
In the last century, all the fruit shops was asere like this, but today, most people go to buy the fruit at the supermarket.
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A lovely description, I can really imagine being there!
May 3, 2022
Thanks.
Near home there are's a lovely and olold fruit and vegetable fruit shop.
'vegetable and fruit shop' isn't technically wrong, but sounds odd to a native speaker; convention is to say 'fruit and vegetable shop'
The several fruits are placed in a perfect order in theirs wooden boxes.
In the middle of each box the seller put a black sign with the price written with ain white chalk.
But the avocado isare sold by piecesindividually, for instance 2,50€/each.
Again, 'pieces' isn't really wrong, but 'individually' is a more common way of phrasing this
Out of curiositInterestingly, the shop has put ion the walls a placards with the text "NDo not touch", so allnything you want to buy, you must ask to the shop assisteant.
The artichokes come from close cropnearby, and the oranges are harvested from just two hundred and fifty km away.
In the last century, all the fruit shops was asere like this, but today, most people go to buy the fruit at the supermarket.
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Great stuff!
May 3, 2022
Thanks.
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