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Arcley

yesterday

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An Ocean Of Frustation

There's an ocean of frustations
And I drown in it every day
Silence, thougths, inmsomnia.
I wish I could reboot
Try again
But maybe it only made it worst
It is a lot of changes
But the lonliness its the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.


Existe um mar de frustrações
E eu me afogo nele todos os dias
Silêncio, pensamentos,insônia.
Gostaria de resetar
Tentar de novo
Mas talvez só pioraria
São muitas mudanças
Mas a solidão continua a mesma
Tem algo me movendo, mas não sei o que é.

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An Ocean Oof Frustration

There's an ocean of frustrations
And I drown in it every day

Silence, thoug
thts, inmsomnia.

I wish I could reboot
Try again

But maybe
ithat'll only madke it worst ¶
It i
e ¶
There'
s a lot of changes
But the lon
eliness, it's the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.

In formally written English, "it's" means "it is", while "its" is a possessive.

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Very well written! Mostly just spelling errors, which is something even native speakers struggle with constantly anyway. Depending on your browser, you might be able to turn on spellchecking, if that would help.

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Arcley

today

2

thank you I appreciate the help.

There's an ocean of frustrations
And I drown in it every day

Silence, thoug
thts, inmsomnia.

Spelling corrections

I wish I could reboot
Try again

But maybe it only made it wors
t e
It is a lot of changes

But the lon
eliness its the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.

Worst > worse

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Arcley

today

2

thank you.

There's an ocean of frustations ¶
A
and I drown in it every day
Silence, thoug
thts, inmsomnia.

I wish I could reboot
Try again

But maybe it only made it worst

It is a lot of change
s
But the lon
eliness its still the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.

Arcley's avatar
Arcley

today

2

thank you.

An Ocean Of Frustation


An Ocean Oof Frustration

There's an ocean of frustations And I drown in it every day Silence, thougths, inmsomnia.


There's an ocean of frustations ¶
A
and I drown in it every day
Silence, thoug
thts, inmsomnia.

There's an ocean of frustrations
And I drown in it every day

Silence, thoug
thts, inmsomnia.

Spelling corrections

There's an ocean of frustrations
And I drown in it every day

Silence, thoug
thts, inmsomnia.

I wish I could reboot Try again But maybe it only made it worst It is a lot of changes But the lonliness its the same There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.


I wish I could reboot
Try again

But maybe it only made it worst

It is a lot of change
s
But the lon
eliness its still the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.

I wish I could reboot
Try again

But maybe it only made it wors
t e
It is a lot of changes

But the lon
eliness its the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.

Worst > worse

I wish I could reboot
Try again

But maybe
ithat'll only madke it worst ¶
It i
e ¶
There'
s a lot of changes
But the lon
eliness, it's the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.

In formally written English, "it's" means "it is", while "its" is a possessive.

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