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18274211076

March 22, 2023

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An normal day

In the morning,i got up about 7:15 AM,then i walked to my school and had a breakfast with my colleague.We talked about the weather and the favorite food.
When i arrived at the office,instead of working immediately,i spent an hour doing something to improve myself.I read a foreign language novels A Brief History of Mankind.It is hard for me.
After reading,i started writing papers until i got off work in the afternoon.
It is a normal day,but it is my real life and i am enjoying the joy.


A Normal Day
This morning I got up around 7:15 AM, then walked to school and had breakfast with a colleague. We talked about the weather and our favorite food.When I arrived at the office, instead of working immediately, I spent an hour doing something to improve myself. I read a novel called _A Brief History of Mankind_ in a foreign language. It is hard for me.After reading, I started writing papers until I got off work in the afternoon.It is a normal day, but it is my real life and I am enjoying it.

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An normal day

'an' is used with words that start with a vowel ( a,e,i,o,u ) and 'h'. for other words use 'a'

In the morning,i goet up at about 7:15 AM,then i walked to my school and had ave breakfast with my colleague.We talked about the weather and theour favorite food.

When i arrived at the office,instead of working immediately,i spentd an hour doing something to improve myself.I read a foreign language novels. A Brief History of Mankind.It is hard for me.

After reading,i started writing papers until i goet off work in the afternoon.

It is a normal day,but it is my real life and i am enjoying the joy it.

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When describing things you do on a regular basis/every day, you describe them in simple tense.
past tense - i went to school ( this already happened in the past)
present tense - I am going to school ( currently doing it)
simple present - I go to school (something you have done in the past and will coninue to do in the future)

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18274211076

March 23, 2023

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好的,谢谢。你的说明很详细,对我的帮助很大。

An n Normal dDay

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

In theThis morning,i I got up abroutnd 7:15 AM, then i walked to my school and had a breakfast with mya colleague. We talked about the weather and theour favorite food.

We always capitalize the word "I."

When iI arrived at the office, instead of working immediately,i I spent an hour doing something to improve myself. I read a foreign language novels novel called _A Brief History of Mankind._ in a foreign language. It is hard for me.

After reading,i I started writing papers until iI got off work in the afternoon.

It is a normal day, but it is my real life and iI am enjoying ithe joy.

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Nice work!

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18274211076

March 22, 2023

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谢谢你的好意和帮助!

An normal day


An n Normal dDay

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

An normal day

'an' is used with words that start with a vowel ( a,e,i,o,u ) and 'h'. for other words use 'a'

In the morning,i got up about 7:15 AM,then i walked to my school and had a breakfast with my colleague.We talked about the weather and the favorite food.


In theThis morning,i I got up abroutnd 7:15 AM, then i walked to my school and had a breakfast with mya colleague. We talked about the weather and theour favorite food.

We always capitalize the word "I."

In the morning,i goet up at about 7:15 AM,then i walked to my school and had ave breakfast with my colleague.We talked about the weather and theour favorite food.

When i arrived at the office,instead of working immediately,i spent an hour doing something to improve myself.I read a foreign language novels A Brief History of Mankind.It is hard for me.


When iI arrived at the office, instead of working immediately,i I spent an hour doing something to improve myself. I read a foreign language novels novel called _A Brief History of Mankind._ in a foreign language. It is hard for me.

When i arrived at the office,instead of working immediately,i spentd an hour doing something to improve myself.I read a foreign language novels. A Brief History of Mankind.It is hard for me.

After reading,i started writing papers until i got off work in the afternoon.


After reading,i I started writing papers until iI got off work in the afternoon.

After reading,i started writing papers until i goet off work in the afternoon.

It is a normal day,but it is my real life and i am enjoying the joy.


It is a normal day, but it is my real life and iI am enjoying ithe joy.

It is a normal day,but it is my real life and i am enjoying the joy it.

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