Jan. 8, 2021
An interesting conversation
In terms of interesting conversations I have ever had, I would say I had so many interesting conversations, among which impressed me most was daily talking with one of my friends. Actually, he is not my friend, but a person I know from a language-learning app. He is a highly well-formed young boy and every time I try to strike up a conversation, he can easily catch up with what I want to topic. He seems to know everything and can always surprise me. The last conversation we had was about the history of Jews and I just told him what I know about Jews, the timeline of their history. But he can get into detail even how many tribes they had in 5000 years ago, the feud between Jews and Egypt and how Jews were exiled. The reason why I think this conversation fascinates me is that I can learn a lot of knowledge from this conversation. In China, some social media is not available, so what I can get online is limited and full of bias. But he can inform me of something new. Another thing is that he is funny and the way he speaks always make me laugh.
An interesting conversation
In terms of interesting conversations I have ever had, I would say I had so've had many interesting conversations, among which; one that particularly impressed me most was daily talkingwas an everyday conversation with one of my friends.
"In terms of interesting conversations I have ever had" <- I don't feel this is going to work.
Actually, he is not my friend, but a person I know from a language-learning app.
He is a highly well-formedmature young boylad and every time I try to strike up a conversation with him, he can easily catchkeep up with what I want to topicdiscuss.
"highly well-formed young boy" sounds like you're describing him physically, and is not appropriate. Calling someone a "boy" is problematic (e.g. this term was historically used to patronize black people).
"try to" <- not needed... you actually start a conversation with him
He seems to know everything and can alwaysoften surprises me.
"can always surprise me" is correct, but it's a bit loose (imprecise)
The last conversation we had was about the history of Jews and I just told him what I know about Jews,: the timeline of their history.
But he can geteven describe into detail even how many tribes they had in 5000 years ago, the feud between Jews and Egypt and how Jews were exiled.
The reason why I think this conversation fascinates me is that I can learngained a lot of knowledge from this conversation.
"this conversation" implies *one* conversation which is mismatched with "can learn" (not past tense).
"learn a lot of knowledge" sounds like a tautology: is it possible to learn anything other than knowledge? It could be "gain a lot of knowledge" or "learn a lot".
Ordinarily, repetition of "conversation" is undesirable.
In China, some social media iservices are not available, so what I can get online is limited and full of bias.
I think "some social media is not available" is incorrect because "some" is plural while "is" is singular.
But he can inform me of some new thing news.
"something new" implies just *one* thing.
How I might say this: "But he often tells me about new things."
Another thing is that he is funny and the way he speaks always makes me laugh.
Jan. 11, 2021
Thank you so much~
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In terms of interesting conversations I have ever had, I would say I had so many interesting conversations, among which impressed me most was daily talking with one of my friends. I "In terms of interesting conversations I have ever had" <- I don't feel this is going to work. |
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Actually, he is not my friend, but a person I know from a language-learning app. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is a highly well-formed young boy and every time I try to strike up a conversation, he can easily catch up with what I want to topic. He is a "highly well-formed young boy" sounds like you're describing him physically, and is not appropriate. Calling someone a "boy" is problematic (e.g. this term was historically used to patronize black people). "try to" <- not needed... you actually start a conversation with him |
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He seems to know everything and can always surprise me. He seems to know everything and "can always surprise me" is correct, but it's a bit loose (imprecise) |
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The last conversation we had was about the history of Jews and I just told him what I know about Jews, the timeline of their history. The last conversation we had was about the history of Jews and I |
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But he can get into detail even how many tribes they had in 5000 years ago, the feud between Jews and Egypt and how Jews were exiled. But he can |
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The reason why I think this conversation fascinates me is that I can learn a lot of knowledge from this conversation. The reason why I think this conversation fascinates me is that I "this conversation" implies *one* conversation which is mismatched with "can learn" (not past tense). "learn a lot of knowledge" sounds like a tautology: is it possible to learn anything other than knowledge? It could be "gain a lot of knowledge" or "learn a lot". Ordinarily, repetition of "conversation" is undesirable. |
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In China, some social media is not available, so what I can get online is limited and full of bias. In China, some social media I think "some social media is not available" is incorrect because "some" is plural while "is" is singular. |
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But he can inform me of something new. But he can inform me of some new thing "something new" implies just *one* thing. How I might say this: "But he often tells me about new things." |
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Another thing is that he is funny and the way he speaks always make me laugh. Another thing is that he is funny and the way he speaks always makes me laugh. |
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