June 24, 2025
I'ld like to travel to Germany, specially because I love motorsport, and Germany has a lot of things related, for example the Porsche museum, or the Mercedes headquarters. Also, Germany has an one of the best football leagues, the Bundesliga - And I support Borussia dortmund, so it would be great to be in the stadium for a match. Finally, Germany has many incredibles things on terms of infrastructure, I would love to visit some places that have an incredible design, like some parks that are fabulously integrated into the city.
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I'ld like to travel to Germany, especially because I love motorsports, and Germany has a lot of things related to it, for example the Porsche museum, or the Mercedes headquarters.
Also, Germany has an one of the best football leagues, the Bundesliga - A-- and I support Borussia dDortmund, so it would be great to be in the stadium for a match.
Finally, Germany has many incredibles things oin terms of infrastructure, I would love to visit some places that have an incredible design, like some parks that are fabulously integrated into the city.
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This is a relatively minor issue, but generally, all words in a title are capitalised, with some exceptions.
I'ld like to travel to Germany, especially because I love motorsport, and Germany has a lot of things related to it, for example the Porsche museum, or and the Mercedes headquarters.
(1) Ending the phrase on "related" doesn't sound very natural to me.
(2) "Things" is a rather generic word. Alternatively, you can consider: "and Germany has a lot of attractions related to it".
(3) I removed the last comma because I think the sentence would flow better without it. While commas can help make a sentence easier to read, too many of them can also make it feel slightly clunky.
(4) "And" would be more appropriate than "or", since they're both examples of said related things and there's nothing saying there can only be one.
Also, Germany has an one of the best football leagues, the Bundesliga - Aand I support Borussia dDortmund, so it would be great to be in the stadium for a match.
(1) We don't use articles ("a", "an", "the") before the phrase "one of the [adjective]".
(2) By the way, we use "a" before the word "one", not "an". For example, we don't say "an one of a kind stadium", but rather "a one of a kind stadium". This is because when to use "an" is not dictated by whether the following word starts with a vowel, but whether it starts with a vowel CONSONANT. "One" does not start with a vowel consonant, so "a" is used instead.
(3) "And" does not mark the start of a new sentence, so it should not be capitalised.
(4) "Borussia Dortmund" is the name of a football team and a proper noun, so both words should be capitalised.
Finally, Germany has many incredibles things oin terms of infrastructure, and I would love to visit some places that have an incredible design, like some parks that are fabulously integrated into the city.
(1) Similarly to the first sentence, "things" can be a generic word. Alternatively, you can consider: "Germany has a lot of incredible infrastructure".
(2) The addition of "and" helps to join the two phrases together and make the sentence flow more smoothly and naturally.
(3) "I would love to visit some places that have an incredible design" is grammatically sound, but might be unnecessarily wordy and hence not be the most natural here. Here are some alternatives: "I would love to visit some incredibly well-designed places" or "I would love to visit some places with incredible designs".
Finally, Germany has many incredibles things on terms of infrastructure, I would love to visit some places that have an incredible design, like some parks that are fabulously integrated into the city. Finally, Germany has many incredible (1) Similarly to the first sentence, "things" can be a generic word. Alternatively, you can consider: "Germany has a lot of incredible infrastructure". (2) The addition of "and" helps to join the two phrases together and make the sentence flow more smoothly and naturally. (3) "I would love to visit some places that have an incredible design" is grammatically sound, but might be unnecessarily wordy and hence not be the most natural here. Here are some alternatives: "I would love to visit some incredibly well-designed places" or "I would love to visit some places with incredible designs". Finally, Germany has many incredible |
An incredible country An This is a relatively minor issue, but generally, all words in a title are capitalised, with some exceptions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I'ld like to travel to Germany, specially because I love motorsport, and Germany has a lot of things related, for example the Porsche museum, or the Mercedes headquarters. I' (1) Ending the phrase on "related" doesn't sound very natural to me. (2) "Things" is a rather generic word. Alternatively, you can consider: "and Germany has a lot of attractions related to it". (3) I removed the last comma because I think the sentence would flow better without it. While commas can help make a sentence easier to read, too many of them can also make it feel slightly clunky. (4) "And" would be more appropriate than "or", since they're both examples of said related things and there's nothing saying there can only be one. I' |
Also, Germany has an one of the best football leagues, the Bundesliga - And I support Borussia dortmund, so it would be great to be in the stadium for a match. Also, Germany has (1) We don't use articles ("a", "an", "the") before the phrase "one of the [adjective]". (2) By the way, we use "a" before the word "one", not "an". For example, we don't say "an one of a kind stadium", but rather "a one of a kind stadium". This is because when to use "an" is not dictated by whether the following word starts with a vowel, but whether it starts with a vowel CONSONANT. "One" does not start with a vowel consonant, so "a" is used instead. (3) "And" does not mark the start of a new sentence, so it should not be capitalised. (4) "Borussia Dortmund" is the name of a football team and a proper noun, so both words should be capitalised. Also, Germany has |
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