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Aug. 2, 2023

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An important year in my life

One of the most important years in my life was 2022. I ended a typical school and polish school this year. I had been going to polish school for two years.

Also It was important year for me bacause I had living only with my dad, cat and dog for two years. Because my sister are living in Poland for 6 years. She studies in the university. At the same time She has a job. My mum lives and works in Poland too.

In the middle of the Septaember in 2022 I got a newz that I accepted to the NAWA program. I had been waited for this anwer for all summer.
I changed a country where I am living. I moved from Belarus to Poland.

I met my good friend Kasia this year in Torun (It is a city in Poland).

I had my first inderpendent travel to abroud. I and Kasia went to German to Nurmberg together. After this trip I understood that I feel really comfortable near Kasia.

Also I fell in love for the first time, but person ,that I loved, didn't reciprocate me. I felt so bad about it for some months.

I got drunk for the first time in December.

Yeah, It was so emotional and important year for me.

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An import significant year in my life

O2022 was one of the most importsignificant years inof my life was 2022.

I ended a typicalThis year, I finished both a regular school and a polish school this year.

I had been going to polish school for two years.For two years, I attended this polish school.¶

Also It was importalso a significant year for me baecause for the previous two years, I had living oned solely with my dad, a cat, and a dog for two years.

Becaussince my sister arehas spent six years living in Poland for 6 years.

She studies in theis a university. student.¶

AShe works at the same time She has a job.

My mum lives and works in Poland tooas well.

In the middle of theMidway through Septaember in 2022, I got a newz that Ilearned that I had been accepted into the NAWA program.

I had been waiteding for this anwer forresponse all summer.

I changed a country where I am living.relocated to a new country.¶

I movrelocated from Belarus to Poland.

I met my good friend Kasian Torun (a Polish city) thisat year in Torun (It is a city in Poland)., I met my dear friend Kasia.¶

I had my first inderpendent travel to abroud.went overseas for the first time on my own.¶

I and Kasia went to GermanKasia and I traveled together to Nurmberg together.in Germany.¶

After this trip I understood that I feel really comfortable nearvacation, I realized how at ease I am around Kasia.

AI also I fell in love for the first time, butexperienced my first romantic relationship,but the person ,that I loved, didn't reciprocate me.turn my affection.¶

For several months, I felt so badawful about it for some months.

Yeahs, Iit was soan extremely emotional and importsignificant year for me.

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VnukPuk

Aug. 3, 2023

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Thank you <3

An important year in my life

One of the most important years in my life was 2022.

I ended a typical school and pmy studies in a typical Polish school this year.

I had been going to pthis Polish school for two years.

Also I, it was an important year for me bacause I had living only with my dad, cat and dog for two years.

BecauseAnd my sister arehas been living in Poland for 6 years.

She studies in the university.

At the same time Sshe has a job.

My mum also lives and works in Poland too.

In the middle of the Septaember in 2022, I got a newzs that I had been accepted into the NAWA program.

I had been waiteding for this anwer fornews all summer.

I changed athe country where I amwas living.

I moved from Belarus to Poland.

I met my good friend Kasia this year in Torun (Itwhich is a city in Poland).

I had my first inderpendent travel to abrouad.

I and Kasia went to Germanand I went to Nuremberg, Germany together.

After this trip I understoorealised that I feelt really comfortable nearwith Kasia.

AI also I fell in love for the first time, but person ,that I loved, didn't reciprocate me.it. ( it wasn’t mutual)

I felt sovery bad about it for somea few months.

I got drunk for the first time in December.

Yeah, Iit was soan emotional and important year for me.

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VnukPuk

Aug. 3, 2023

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I ended a typical school and pmy studies in a typical Polish school this year.

Thanks for the correction, but I wanted to say that I graduated from two schools: regular and Polish.

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VnukPuk

Aug. 3, 2023

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Thank you one more time <3

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An import significant year in my life

One of the most important years in my life was 2022.


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O2022 was one of the most importsignificant years inof my life was 2022.

I ended a typical school and polish school this year.


I ended a typical school and pmy studies in a typical Polish school this year.

I ended a typicalThis year, I finished both a regular school and a polish school this year.

I had been going to polish school for two years.


I had been going to pthis Polish school for two years.

I had been going to polish school for two years.For two years, I attended this polish school.¶

Also It was important year for me bacause I had living only with my dad, cat and dog for two years.


Also I, it was an important year for me bacause I had living only with my dad, cat and dog for two years.

Also It was importalso a significant year for me baecause for the previous two years, I had living oned solely with my dad, a cat, and a dog for two years.

Because my sister are living in Poland for 6 years.


BecauseAnd my sister arehas been living in Poland for 6 years.

Becaussince my sister arehas spent six years living in Poland for 6 years.

She studies in the university.


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She studies in theis a university. student.¶

At the same time She has a job.


At the same time Sshe has a job.

AShe works at the same time She has a job.

My mum lives and works in Poland too.


My mum also lives and works in Poland too.

My mum lives and works in Poland tooas well.

In the middle of the Septaember in 2022 I got a newz that I accepted to the NAWA program.


In the middle of the Septaember in 2022, I got a newzs that I had been accepted into the NAWA program.

In the middle of theMidway through Septaember in 2022, I got a newz that Ilearned that I had been accepted into the NAWA program.

I had been waited for this anwer for all summer.


I had been waiteding for this anwer fornews all summer.

I had been waiteding for this anwer forresponse all summer.

I changed a country where I am living.


I changed athe country where I amwas living.

I changed a country where I am living.relocated to a new country.¶

I moved from Belarus to Poland.


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I movrelocated from Belarus to Poland.

I met my good friend Kasia this year in Torun (It is a city in Poland).


I met my good friend Kasia this year in Torun (Itwhich is a city in Poland).

I met my good friend Kasian Torun (a Polish city) thisat year in Torun (It is a city in Poland)., I met my dear friend Kasia.¶

I had my first inderpendent travel to abroud.


I had my first inderpendent travel to abrouad.

I had my first inderpendent travel to abroud.went overseas for the first time on my own.¶

I and Kasia went to German to Nurmberg together.


I and Kasia went to Germanand I went to Nuremberg, Germany together.

I and Kasia went to GermanKasia and I traveled together to Nurmberg together.in Germany.¶

After this trip I understood that I feel really comfortable near Kasia.


After this trip I understoorealised that I feelt really comfortable nearwith Kasia.

After this trip I understood that I feel really comfortable nearvacation, I realized how at ease I am around Kasia.

Also I fell in love for the first time, but person ,that I loved, didn't reciprocate me.


AI also I fell in love for the first time, but person ,that I loved, didn't reciprocate me.it. ( it wasn’t mutual)

AI also I fell in love for the first time, butexperienced my first romantic relationship,but the person ,that I loved, didn't reciprocate me.turn my affection.¶

I felt so bad about it for some months.


I felt sovery bad about it for somea few months.

For several months, I felt so badawful about it for some months.

I got drunk for the first time in December.


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Yeah, It was so emotional and important year for me.


Yeah, Iit was soan emotional and important year for me.

Yeahs, Iit was soan extremely emotional and importsignificant year for me.

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