March 18, 2025
An experience I will never forget
The situation was critical. I was almost a mile from the shore, surrounded by sharks and paralysed by fear. I could not see how I could possibly escape, and I thought that was the end.
It all happened during my vacation in Florida last summer. Me and my friend Mary were bathing in the sea when a strong current started bringing me further and further from the shore and from my friend. I started panicking because I notices that I was so far from the shore and I was not a good swimmer. Suddenly, a shark appeared in the distance. In no time, I was surrounded by two sharks. I knew that I would sooner or later get eaten.
Luckily, Mary saw me in danger snd started swimming towards me. In her past years, she had been a lifeguard, so she knew how to scare sharks and saved me with ease.
It was an experience I will never forget.
I was almost a mile away from the shore, surrounded by sharks and paralysed by fear.
I started panicking because I noticesd that I was so far from the shore and I was/am not a good swimmer.
I knew that I would sooner or later get eaten.
You could also say be eaten
Luckily, Mary saw me in danger sand started swimming towards me.
In her past years, she had been a lifeguard, so she knew how to scare sharks and saved me with ease.
Also possible: In recent years/ in the past she had been a lifeguard, so she knew how to/was able to scare the sharks away and was able to save me with ease.
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An experience I will never forget
The situation was critical.
I was almost a mile from the shore, surrounded by sharks and paralysed bywith fear.
I could not see how I could possibly escape, and I thought that was the end.
ItThis all happened during my vacation in Florida last summer.
Me and my friend Mary and I were bathing in the sea when a strong current started bringing me further and further from the shore and from my friend.
I started panicking because I noticesd that I was so far from the shore and I was not a good swimmer.
Suddenly, a shark appeared in the distance.
In no time, I was surrounded by two sharks.
I knew that I would sooner or later get eaten.
It sounds better to say "I knew that sooner or later, I would be eaten"
Luckily, Mary saw me in danger snd started swimming towards me.
In her past years, sShe had been a lifeguard in the past, so she knew how to scare sharks and so she saved me with ease.
Or more simply "She used to be a lifeguard, so..."
It was an experience I will never forget.
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I don't know if that was a true story, but if it is, you are very lucky that Mary was such a good swimmer!
March 19, 2025
Thankfully it was invented! Thank you for the correction
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I was almost a mile from the shore, surrounded by sharks and paralysed by fear. I was almost a mile from the shore, surrounded by sharks and paralysed I was almost a mile away from the shore, surrounded by sharks and paralysed by fear. |
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I could not see how I could possibly escape, and I thought that was the end. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It all happened during my vacation in Florida last summer.
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Me and my friend Mary were bathing in the sea when a strong current started bringing me further and further from the shore and from my friend. M |
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I started panicking because I notices that I was so far from the shore and I was not a good swimmer. I started panicking because I notice I started panicking because I notice |
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Suddenly, a shark appeared in the distance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In no time, I was surrounded by two sharks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I knew that I would sooner or later get eaten. I knew that I would sooner or later get eaten. It sounds better to say "I knew that sooner or later, I would be eaten" I knew that I would sooner or later get eaten. You could also say be eaten |
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Luckily, Mary saw me in danger snd started swimming towards me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Luckily, Mary saw me in danger |
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In her past years, she had been a lifeguard, so she knew how to scare sharks and saved me with ease.
Or more simply "She used to be a lifeguard, so..." In her past years, she had been a lifeguard, so she knew how to scare sharks and saved me with ease. Also possible: In recent years/ in the past she had been a lifeguard, so she knew how to/was able to scare the sharks away and was able to save me with ease. |
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