Dec. 22, 2023
Due to the fact that humans are basically social creatures, they almost cannot depend only upon their
own capabilities, and they need to have cooperation with others to fulfill their accomplishments. The path
of life can be facilitated if people are in interactivity with their true friends.
In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions being supportive and caring only
if all the situation is going smoothly and unproblematically. They have embarked upon the partnership
with only the aim of exploitation the relationship for their own advantages, and when a problem or severe
adversity happens to their mates, they disappear swiftly in order no to be affected by the issue. Therefore,
they are not reliable at all, and under no circumstances should this companionship persist.
The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticated, since they often have wisely
planned the condition in advance, and they are more alert to the case than the friendship victims, so they
can not be easily identified. The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to
commencement of a friendship as to whether they are worth being in contact. Even by adopting this
approach, like marriage, friend-choosing process is always an unknown quantity.
All in all, human generation may have the need for trusting their friends and share their success and
sorrow with them, but some cunning unreal friends are likely to be wrongly chosen. Some screening
practices may be helpful, although they are not practical in all cases.
The path
¶ of life can be facilitated if people are in interactivity with their true friends.
"in interactivity" is understandable, but sounds awkward to me.
In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions beingwho are supportive and caring only
¶ if the situation is going smoothly and unproblematically.
if all
They have embarked upon the partnership
¶with only the aim of exploitationing the relationship for their own advantages, and when a problem or severe
¶
adversity happens to their mates, they disappear swiftly in order no toto not be affected by the issue.
You can say "exploiting the relationship" or "exploitation of the relationship". I think "in order not to be" and "in order to not be" might both be acceptable, but to me, the latter sounds better here.
The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to
¶commencement of a friendship as to whether they are worth being in contact with.
Even by adopting this
¶approach, like marriage, the friend-choosing process is always an unknown quantity.
All in all, human generations may have the need for trusting their friends and shareing their success and
¶sorrow with them, but some cunning unrealtrue friends are likely to be wrongly chosen.
You can say someone is or isn't a "real friend" or a "true friend", but unreal and untrue are different to me. An "unreal" friend is a friend who doesn't exist, while an "untrue" friend is a real person, but not really your friend.
In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions beingwho are supportive and caring only
¶
if all the situation is going smoothly and unproblematically.
unproblematically is not technically a word, at least in the Merriam Webster dictionary. It's just fine if you want to use it informally, but if you want to be formal in your writing maybe choose a different word.
They have embarked upon the partnership
¶
with only the aim of exploitationing the relationship for their own advantagesgain/benefit, and when a problem or severe
¶
adversity happens to their matesfriend, they disappear swiftly in order not to be affected by the issue.
mates is quite casual and it seems like you are going for a formal tone, so I recommend a different word.
Therefore, they are not reliable at all, and under no circumstances should this companionship persist.
The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticated, since they often have wisely
¶
planned the condition in advance, and they are more alert to the case than the friendship victims, so they
¶
can not be easily identified.
I'm not understanding this sentence, maybe try rewriting it. Leave a comment so I can correct it.
The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to
¶as to whether they are worth being in contact with prior to ¶
commencement of a friendship
starting a friendship.
Even by adopting this
¶
approach, like marriage,the friend-choosing process, like marriage, is always an unknown quantity.
All in all, human generationpeople may have the need forto trusting their friends and share their successes and
¶
sorrows with them, but sometimes they choose cunning, unreal friends are likely to be wrongly chosen.
Some screening practices may be helpful, although they are not practical in all cases.
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Very well written! Your English is excellent. I think sometimes you are looking for synonyms for a word, or trying to find a more formal word for something and it ends up not working. Keep it up, it is difficult to find synonyms and understand the nuances between different words, so don't get discouraged!
Also, fair-weather friends are the worst because when you need them they aren't there for you!
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Due to the fact that humans are basically social creatures, they almost cannot depend only upon their own capabilities, and they need to have cooperation with others to fulfill their accomplishments. Due to the fact that humans are basically social creatures, they [almost + cannot] do not usually go together. Fulfill + accomplishments do not go well together. |
The path of life can be facilitated if people are in interactivity with their true friends. The path The path "in interactivity" is understandable, but sounds awkward to me. |
In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions being supportive and caring only if all the situation is going smoothly and unproblematically.
In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions unproblematically is not technically a word, at least in the Merriam Webster dictionary. It's just fine if you want to use it informally, but if you want to be formal in your writing maybe choose a different word. In opposed to authentic friends, fair-weather friends are companions |
They have embarked upon the partnership with only the aim of exploitation the relationship for their own advantages, and when a problem or severe adversity happens to their mates, they disappear swiftly in order no to be affected by the issue. They have embarked They have embarked upon the partnership mates is quite casual and it seems like you are going for a formal tone, so I recommend a different word. They have embarked upon the partnership You can say "exploiting the relationship" or "exploitation of the relationship". I think "in order not to be" and "in order to not be" might both be acceptable, but to me, the latter sounds better here. |
Therefore, they are not reliable at all, and under no circumstances should this companionship persist. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticated, since they often have wisely planned the condition in advance, and they are more alert to the case than the friendship victims, so they can not be easily identified. The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be The discernment of such so-called friends can sometimes be sophisticated, since they often have wisely I'm not understanding this sentence, maybe try rewriting it. Leave a comment so I can correct it. |
The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to commencement of a friendship as to whether they are worth being in contact. The solution may The solution may be more investigation or examination The solution may be more investigation or examination prior to |
Even by adopting this approach, like marriage, friend-choosing process is always an unknown quantity. Even by adopting this Even by adopting this Even by adopting this |
All in all, human generation may have the need for trusting their friends and share their success and sorrow with them, but some cunning unreal friends are likely to be wrongly chosen. All in all, human All in all, All in all, human You can say someone is or isn't a "real friend" or a "true friend", but unreal and untrue are different to me. An "unreal" friend is a friend who doesn't exist, while an "untrue" friend is a real person, but not really your friend. |
Some screening practices may be helpful, although they are not practical in all cases. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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