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Jack

Aug. 17, 2025

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Ten days have already passed since autumn began, but it is still hot these days and the highest temperature can even reach 36 to 40 degrees Celsius.
I can't go out during the daytime. Instead, I only stay at home and turn on the air conditioner. I hope it will get cooler soon so that I can enjoy outdoor activities.
I consulted the 15 - day weather forecast, and it indicated that the temperature won't dip until September. The temperature between now and September will still be between 36 and 40 degrees Celsius.
Undoubtedly, I have to continue to endure the heat for about another ten days.

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An English Post

Ten days have already passedIts been ten days since autumn began, but it is still hot these days and the highest temperature can even reach. For example,the temperature can go anywhere from 36 to 40 degrees Celsius.

I can't go out during the daytime.

Instead, I only stay at home and turn on the air conditioner.

this can be included in the previous sentence.

I hope it will get cooler soon so that I can enjoy outdoor activities.

I consulted thelooked at a 15 - day weather forecast, and it indicatedthey predict that the temperature won't dip until September.

predict/forecast = 预测

The temperature bBetween now and September, the temperature will still be between 36 and 40 degrees Celsius.

structural change.

Undoubtedly, I have to continue to endureing the heat for about anothermore ten days.

i have to continue (enduring) = 还有受苦

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Jack

Aug. 17, 2025

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谢谢。

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Ten days have already passed since autumn began, but it is still hot these days and the highest temperature can even reach up to 36 to 40 degrees Celsius.

Your original sentence was good, I just suggested this alternative which still conveys the same idea.

I can't go out during the daytime.

Your original sentence was still good, I just prefer how “during the day” sounds (but I think that’s purely personal preference)

Instead, I only stay at home and turn on the air conditioner.

I hope it will get cooler soon so that I can enjoy outdoor activities.

I consulthecked the 15 - day weather forecast, and it indicated that the temperature won't dip until September.

Depends on the context - “consulted” feels very formal to me

The temperature between now and September will still be between 36 and 40 degrees Celsius.

Undoubtedly, I have to continue to endure the heat for about another ten days.

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Good job and good luck with that heat! I hope things start to cool down soon

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Jack

Aug. 17, 2025

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Thank you very much.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Ten days have already passed since autumn began, but it is still hot these days and the highest temperature can even reach 36 to 40 degrees Celsius.


Ten days have already passed since autumn began, but it is still hot these days and the highest temperature can even reach up to 36 to 40 degrees Celsius.

Your original sentence was good, I just suggested this alternative which still conveys the same idea.

Ten days have already passedIts been ten days since autumn began, but it is still hot these days and the highest temperature can even reach. For example,the temperature can go anywhere from 36 to 40 degrees Celsius.

I can't go out during the daytime.


I can't go out during the daytime.

Your original sentence was still good, I just prefer how “during the day” sounds (but I think that’s purely personal preference)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Instead, I only stay at home and turn on the air conditioner.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Instead, I only stay at home and turn on the air conditioner.

this can be included in the previous sentence.

I hope it will get cooler soon so that I can enjoy outdoor activities.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I consulted the 15 - day weather forecast, and it indicated that the temperature won't dip until September.


I consulthecked the 15 - day weather forecast, and it indicated that the temperature won't dip until September.

Depends on the context - “consulted” feels very formal to me

I consulted thelooked at a 15 - day weather forecast, and it indicatedthey predict that the temperature won't dip until September.

predict/forecast = 预测

The temperature between now and September will still be between 36 and 40 degrees Celsius.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The temperature bBetween now and September, the temperature will still be between 36 and 40 degrees Celsius.

structural change.

Undoubtedly, I have to continue to endure the heat for about another ten days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Undoubtedly, I have to continue to endureing the heat for about anothermore ten days.

i have to continue (enduring) = 还有受苦

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