Aug. 16, 2025
An English Post
The place I live in is not downtown, so there are fewer buildings around my community. Outside my window, there is a large open area. There are only a few tall buildings in the distance. So I have a good view from the window. It's a little past 5 am now, and it's getting bright outside. I can see the light gray sky before sunrise, the lights from distant residential buildings, and the street lamps. I like the view outside my window because it’s different from other apartments—from their windows, all you can see are tall buildings close by.
The place I live in is not downtown, so there are fewer buildings around my community.
I would say, ‘I don’t live downtown, …”
We use the word “fewER” when we compare 2 or more things.
“There are fewer people living in Xian than Beijing.”
“Few people live in this town.”
I can see the light gray sky before sunrise, the lights from distant residential buildings, and the street lamps.
Aug. 17, 2025
Thank you very much.
The place I live in is not downtownn't in the city centre, so there are fewer buildings around my communityarea.
So I have a good view from the window.
I'd make this a joint sentence with the previous one (e.g., There are only a few tall buildings in the distance so I have a good view from the window).
I can see the light, gray sky before sunrise, the lights from distant residentialapartment buildings, and the street lamps.
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Amazing job! Just edited to make it sound more natural :)
Aug. 16, 2025
Thank you very much.
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An English Post |
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The place I live in is not downtown, so there are fewer buildings around my community. The place I live in is The place I live in is not downtown, so there are few I would say, ‘I don’t live downtown, …” We use the word “fewER” when we compare 2 or more things. “There are fewer people living in Xian than Beijing.” “Few people live in this town.” |
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Out of my window, there is a large piece of open area. |
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Outside my window, there is a large open area. |
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There are only a few tall buildings in the distance. |
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So I have a good view from the window. So I have a good view from the window. I'd make this a joint sentence with the previous one (e.g., There are only a few tall buildings in the distance so I have a good view from the window). |
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It's a little past 5 am now, and it's getting bright outside. |
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I can see the light gray sky before sunrise, the lights from distant residential buildings, and the street lamps. I can see the light, gray sky before sunrise, the lights from distant I can see the light gray sky before sunrise, the lights from distant residential buildings, and the street lamps. |
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I like the view outside my window because it’s different from other apartments—from their windows, all you can see are tall buildings close by. |
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I can see the light gray sky before the sunrise, the lights from the distant residential buildings, as well as the street lamps. |
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I like the view outside my window because it is not like other apartments where what you can see from the window are all tall buildings close by. |
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Now it's a little past 5 am. |
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There are only a few tall buildings in the far distance. |
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So I have a good view looking out from the window. |
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So it outside is getting bright. |
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