Aug. 19, 2025
An English Post
I bought a tricycle last winter. Before that, I rode my bike to work and back.
During the winter, it's too cold where I live.
Whenever I rode a bike to work, the knife - like wind made my nose run and my hands numb. I endured this situation for several years before I finally made the decision to buy a tricycle.
My tricycle is similar to a small car. It almost has everything that a car has. It has two doors, one on each side. The carriage can prevent the winter wind from blowing straight into my face. So it's very comfortable to drive in winter.
If it's summer, I can roll down the two windows on the doors and open the sunroof to get cooler.
I do have a car, but I really don't like to drive it to work. Whenever I drive my car to work, I can't find a free parking space, and sometimes I will get traffic tickets. Furthermore, buying gasoline is also a big expense.
My tricycle is not a motor tricycle. Instead, it's an electric tricycle, which is driven by a set of batteries.
A full charge for the tricycle takes around 10 hours and it can run for about 60 kilometers.
The distance between my apartment and my office is 7.5 kilometers, and I need to go to my office twice every day from Monday to Friday. The charging fee for my commute is about 2 Chinese yuan every day, which is so economical to me. I like my tricycle so much.
An English Post
I bought a tricycle last winter.
Before that, I rode my bike to work and back.
During the winter, it's toovery cold where I live.
Using “too” would imply that the coldness prevents you from doing something, but since you don’t comment on that, I’d use something like “very” or “really”.
Whenever I rode amy bike to work, the knife - -like wind made my nose run and my hands numb.
You were riding your own bike, not some random one off the street, so you would use “my” instead of “a”.
No spaces around the hyphen (-) because sometimes it can be used as punctuation to separate clauses or ideas when there are spaces around it.
I endured this situation for several years before I finally made the decision to buy a tricycle.
My tricycle is similar to a small car.
It has almost has everything that a car has.
It has two doors, with one on each side.
The carriage can prevent the winter wind from blowing straight into my face.
So it's very comfortable to drive in winter.
I would combine this sentence with the last one.
If it's summer, I can roll down the two windows on the doors and open the sunroof to get cooler.
I do have a car, but I don't really don't like to drive it to work.
This is optional depending on how much you don’t like driving it to work. The original order expresses a stronger dislike than the corrected version.
Whenever I drive my car to work, I can't find a free parking space, and sometimes I will get traffic tickets.
This is something that happens (somewhat) regularly when you drive your car to work, so you don’t need the “will”.
Furthermore, buying gasoline is also a big expense.
My tricycle is not a motor tricycle.
Instead, it's an electric tricycle, which is driven by a set of batteries.
A full charge for the tricycle takes around 10 hours and it can run for about 60 kilometers.
The distance between my apartment and my office is 7.5 kilometers, and I need to go to my office twice every day from Monday to Friweekday.
This is optional, but shorter.
The charging fee for my commute is about 2 Chinese yuan every day, which is so economical to me.
I like my tricycle so much.
Aug. 19, 2025
Thank you very much.
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An English Post This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought a tricycle last winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before that, I rode my bike to work and back. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During the winter, it's too cold where I live. During the winter, it's Using “too” would imply that the coldness prevents you from doing something, but since you don’t comment on that, I’d use something like “very” or “really”. |
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Whenever I rode a bike to work, the knife - like wind made my nose run and my hands numb. Whenever I rode You were riding your own bike, not some random one off the street, so you would use “my” instead of “a”. No spaces around the hyphen (-) because sometimes it can be used as punctuation to separate clauses or ideas when there are spaces around it. |
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I endured this situation for several years before I finally made the decision to buy a tricycle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My tricycle is similar to a small car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It almost has everything that a car has. It has almost |
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It has two doors, one on each side. It has two doors, with one on each side. |
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The carriage can prevent the winter wind from blowing straight into my face. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So it's very comfortable to drive in winter. So it's very comfortable to drive in winter. I would combine this sentence with the last one. |
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If it's summer, I can roll down the two windows on the doors and open the sunroof to get cooler. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I do have a car, but I really don't like to drive it to work. I do have a car, but I don't really This is optional depending on how much you don’t like driving it to work. The original order expresses a stronger dislike than the corrected version. |
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Whenever I drive my car to work, I can't find a free parking space, and sometimes I will get traffic tickets. Whenever I drive my car to work, I can't find a free parking space, and sometimes I This is something that happens (somewhat) regularly when you drive your car to work, so you don’t need the “will”. |
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Furthermore, buying gasoline is also a big expense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My tricycle is not a motor tricycle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Instead, it's an electric tricycle, which is driven by a set of batteries. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A full charge for the tricycle takes around 10 hours and it can run for about 60 kilometers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The distance between my apartment and my office is 7.5 kilometers, and I need to go to my office twice every day from Monday to Friday. The distance between my apartment and my office is 7.5 kilometers, and I need to go to my office twice every This is optional, but shorter. |
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The charging fee for my commute is about 2 Chinese yuan every day, which is so economical to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like my tricycle so much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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