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Oct. 1, 2022

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An email: Your free time ( details in notes)

Dear Jannis,

I am very happy to receive your email, and to know you want to know me more. I love playing sports and experienced a super busy time last week. So I didn't play any sports and put more time into studies last week, but usually I would like to run, play basketball and swimming. I am a poor swimmer becasue I do not really skill at swim but only can jump and slap in the swimming pool, while I still enjoy it. In addition, running is the way I like to release stress and it really works. Playing basketball usually provide a competitive feeling and game to myself, I like to play against others and coproate with my teammates on the court. If you ask me who do I do it with? I would rather to say anybody. Radomly is attractive.

Best regards,
Yours
James


This is part of an email you receive from an English friend.


I spent last weekend playing tennis. It was brilliant. Do you like sport? Tell me what you do in your free time. Why do you like it? Who do you do it with?


Now write an email answering your friend’s questions.


Write your email in about 100 words.

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An email: Your free time ( details in notes)

Dear Jannis,

I am very happy to receive your email, and to know you want to get to know me more.

We usually say that we "get to know someone".

For example:
"After talking to her for a long time, I felt like I really got to know her."

I love playing sports and experiencehad a super busy time last week.

It's common to say that someone "had a time".

For example:
"We had a fun time at the beach."
"I had a hard time solving the puzzle."

So I didn't play any sports and put more time into studies last week, but usually I would like to run, play basketball and swimming.

You could also say: "I like running, playing basketball, and swimming."

I am a poor swimmer becasuse I do'm not really skilled at swim butming. I can only can jump and slap in the swimming pool, whilebut I still enjoy it.

In addition, running is the way I like to release stress and it really works.

Playing basketball usually provides a competitive feeling and game to myself,for me. I like to play against others and coprooperate with my teammates on the court.

If you ask me who do I do it with?, I would say anybody.

This should be joined to the sentence after it.

I would rather to say anybody.

(I joined this sentence to the previous one.)

Radomly is attractivI'm interested in playing with anyone.

I wasn't sure what you were trying to say in this sentence, but I hope my suggestion helps express what you were trying to say.
The spelling of the first word in the original sentence should be "randomly".

Best regards,

Yours

You can pick either "best regards" or "yours", but you shouldn't use both. If you use "yours", also remember to add a comma afterwards like you did with "best regards".

James

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Good job! Sometimes it can be hard to find time for our hobbies when we get really busy! Hope you get a chance to enjoy playing sports again soon!

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666coolboy

Oct. 2, 2022

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Thank you for editing and encouragaing.

An email: Your free time ( details in notes)

Dear Jannis,

I am very happy to receive your email, and to know you want to know me morore about me.

"Know me more" is also used but not so often

I love playing sports and experienced a super busy time last week.

"I adore playing sports but I had an extremely busy life last week." would be better
"and" is used to relate two similar things/phrases

SoTherefore, I didn't play any sports and put more time into my studies last week, b. But usually I would like to run, play basketball and swimming.

I am a poor swimmer becasuse I do'm not really skill at swim buted and can only can jump and slap in the swimming pool, while. However, I still enjoy it.

In addition, running is the way I like to release stress and it really works.

Playing basketball usually provides me a competitive feeling and game to myself, I like to play against others and coprooperate with my teammates on the court.

cooperate = working with each other
corporate = a large company

If you ask me who wouldo I do it with?

I would rather to say anybody.

Radomlyness is attractive.

Yours

"Best regards" and "Yours" are 2 ways to end a letter so just choosing 1 is enough

James

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666coolboy

Oct. 2, 2022

1

Thank you for editing!

An email: Your free time ( details in notes)


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Dear Jannis,


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I am very happy to receive your email, and to know you want to know me more.


I am very happy to receive your email, and to know you want to know me morore about me.

"Know me more" is also used but not so often

I am very happy to receive your email, and to know you want to get to know me more.

We usually say that we "get to know someone". For example: "After talking to her for a long time, I felt like I really got to know her."

I love playing sports and experienced a super busy time last week.


I love playing sports and experienced a super busy time last week.

"I adore playing sports but I had an extremely busy life last week." would be better "and" is used to relate two similar things/phrases

I love playing sports and experiencehad a super busy time last week.

It's common to say that someone "had a time". For example: "We had a fun time at the beach." "I had a hard time solving the puzzle."

So I didn't play any sports and put more time into studies last week, but usually I would like to run, play basketball and swimming.


SoTherefore, I didn't play any sports and put more time into my studies last week, b. But usually I would like to run, play basketball and swimming.

So I didn't play any sports and put more time into studies last week, but usually I would like to run, play basketball and swimming.

You could also say: "I like running, playing basketball, and swimming."

I am a poor swimmer becasue I do not really skill at swim but only can jump and slap in the swimming pool, while I still enjoy it.


I am a poor swimmer becasuse I do'm not really skill at swim buted and can only can jump and slap in the swimming pool, while. However, I still enjoy it.

I am a poor swimmer becasuse I do'm not really skilled at swim butming. I can only can jump and slap in the swimming pool, whilebut I still enjoy it.

In addition, running is the way I like to release stress and it really works.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Playing basketball usually provide a competitive feeling and game to myself, I like to play against others and coproate with my teammates on the court.


Playing basketball usually provides me a competitive feeling and game to myself, I like to play against others and coprooperate with my teammates on the court.

cooperate = working with each other corporate = a large company

Playing basketball usually provides a competitive feeling and game to myself,for me. I like to play against others and coprooperate with my teammates on the court.

If you ask me who do I do it with?


If you ask me who wouldo I do it with?

If you ask me who do I do it with?, I would say anybody.

This should be joined to the sentence after it.

I would rather to say anybody.


I would rather to say anybody.

I would rather to say anybody.

(I joined this sentence to the previous one.)

Radomly is attractive.


Radomlyness is attractive.

Radomly is attractivI'm interested in playing with anyone.

I wasn't sure what you were trying to say in this sentence, but I hope my suggestion helps express what you were trying to say. The spelling of the first word in the original sentence should be "randomly".

Best regards,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yours


Yours

"Best regards" and "Yours" are 2 ways to end a letter so just choosing 1 is enough

Yours

You can pick either "best regards" or "yours", but you shouldn't use both. If you use "yours", also remember to add a comma afterwards like you did with "best regards".

James


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