May 5, 2025
        Hello Alexa.
How are you ? , I am fine if you are asking yourself .
I haven't been seeing us for five months . It is a long time , for this reason , I had been thinking that we could made something special for this weekend , as long you had free time .
I heard that this weekend , it will have a gig in downtown . A band is going to play in the new pub for it opening , and I believe , it will be amazing .
As well as the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , that incluided a huge variality of mean , for instance , fish ,meat and delicious dessert making from a incriable famous chef .
I think that this plan can be really enjoy .
what are you thinking ?
On the other hand , We should to talk about our life , because , in this time , my live have been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since  your live must have been changing much too . And I miss you so much all this time .
well , What are you opinion about this plan?
And , if you want to bring someone , you can . I don't care it .
I hope that you had been a good time so far .
Please let me now as soon as possible for booking a table in that pub .
I see you soon .
xoxo , Claire .
      
      
        An email to my friends .
      
    
      
        Hello Alexa.,
      
    
      
        How are you ?
      
    
      
        , I aI’m fine if you are asking yourself .me
      
    
Since you are emailing your friend, it’s alright to use contractions
      
        I haven't been seeing us for not seen you for the past five months .
      
    
I hope this is what you are trying to say?
      
        It ishas been a long time , for this reason and because of this, I hadve been thinking thatif we couldan madke something special for this weekend , as long you hadare free time .
      
    
Since the event has not passed and you are sending an email, you use the present instead of the past tense
      
        I heard that this weekend , it will haveThere is a gig happening downtown .
      
    
Not really understanding what you are saying, but I hope this is what you meant?
      
        A band is going to play in the new pub for it ‘s opening , and I believe ,that it will be amazing .
      
    
      
        As well aslso, the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , thatwhich incluideds a huge varialiety of meanfood , for instance ,: fish ,meat and delicious dessert makingde from an incrediable famous chef .
      
    
      
        I think that this plan can be really enjoy able.
      
    
Since you are describing the plan, use an adjective instead of a verb
      
        wWhat aredo you thinking ?
      
    
      
        On the other hand , We should to talk more about our life , because , inat this time , my livfe haves been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since  your live musta lot, and I wish to talk to you about my day. You can also talk to me about your life since it may have been changing mucha lot too .
      
    
Using “need” may some forceful, so use more gentle words like “wish”
      
        And II also miss you so much after all this time .
      
    
      
        wWell , Wwhat are your opinions about this plan?
      
    
      
        And , if yYou wcant to bring a friend or someone ,else if you cwan t to.
      
    
Your sentence sounds odd, so combine it into one sentence without commas
      
        I don't caremind/ I don’t really care about it .
      
    
Sound more gentle
      
        I hope that you had been a goodpleasant time so far . 
      
    
      
        Please let me know as soon as possible forso I can booking a table there/in thate pub .
      
    
      
        IHope to see you soon .
      
    
Try to sound more gentle and respectful
      
        xoxo , Love,¶
Claire .
      
    
We use xoxo for very causal texts, emails or messages. Since you do not sound that casual to Alexa, I would refrain from using it.
Feedback
Good attempt! Though please try to strengthen your grammar as your sentences sound strange at this level. Do practice more!
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           An email to my friends . An email to my friend  | 
      
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           Hello Alexa. Hello Alexa  | 
      
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           How are you ? How are you  | 
      
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           , I am fine if you are asking yourself . 
 Since you are emailing your friend, it’s alright to use contractions  | 
      
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           I haven't been seeing us for five months . I have I hope this is what you are trying to say?  | 
      
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           It is a long time , for this reason , I had been thinking that we could made something special for this weekend , as long you had free time . It  Since the event has not passed and you are sending an email, you use the present instead of the past tense  | 
      
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           I heard that this weekend , it will have a gig in downtown . I heard that this weekend ,  Not really understanding what you are saying, but I hope this is what you meant?  | 
      
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           A band is going to play in the new pub for it opening , and I believe , it will be amazing . A band is going to play in the new pub for it ‘s opening , and I believe   | 
      
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           As well as the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , that incluided a huge variality of mean , for instance , fish ,meat and delicious dessert making from a incriable famous chef . A  | 
      
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           I think that this plan can be really enjoy . I think that this plan can be really enjoy Since you are describing the plan, use an adjective instead of a verb  | 
      
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           what are you thinking ? 
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           On the other hand , We should to talk about our life , because , in this time , my live have been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live must have been changing much too . On the other hand , We should to talk more about our life , because ,  Using “need” may some forceful, so use more gentle words like “wish”  | 
      
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           And I miss you so much all this time . 
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           well , What are you opinion about this plan? 
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           And , if you want to bring someone , you can . 
 Your sentence sounds odd, so combine it into one sentence without commas  | 
      
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           I don't care it . I don't  Sound more gentle  | 
      
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           I hope that you had been a good time so far . I hope that you had   | 
      
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           Please let me now as soon as possible for booking a table in that pub . Please let me know as soon as possible   | 
      
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           I see you soon . 
 Try to sound more gentle and respectful  | 
      
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           xoxo , Claire . 
 We use xoxo for very causal texts, emails or messages. Since you do not sound that casual to Alexa, I would refrain from using it.  | 
      
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