May 5, 2025
Hello Alexa.
How are you ? , I am fine if you are asking yourself .
I haven't been seeing us for five months . It is a long time , for this reason , I had been thinking that we could made something special for this weekend , as long you had free time .
I heard that this weekend , it will have a gig in downtown . A band is going to play in the new pub for it opening , and I believe , it will be amazing .
As well as the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , that incluided a huge variality of mean , for instance , fish ,meat and delicious dessert making from a incriable famous chef .
I think that this plan can be really enjoy .
what are you thinking ?
On the other hand , We should to talk about our life , because , in this time , my live have been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live must have been changing much too . And I miss you so much all this time .
well , What are you opinion about this plan?
And , if you want to bring someone , you can . I don't care it .
I hope that you had been a good time so far .
Please let me now as soon as possible for booking a table in that pub .
I see you soon .
xoxo , Claire .
An email to my friends .
Hello Alexa.,
How are you ?
, I aI’m fine if you are asking yourself .me
Since you are emailing your friend, it’s alright to use contractions
I haven't been seeing us for not seen you for the past five months .
I hope this is what you are trying to say?
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Since the event has not passed and you are sending an email, you use the present instead of the past tense
I heard that this weekend , it will haveThere is a gig happening downtown .
Not really understanding what you are saying, but I hope this is what you meant?
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I think that this plan can be really enjoy able.
Since you are describing the plan, use an adjective instead of a verb
wWhat aredo you thinking ?
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Using “need” may some forceful, so use more gentle words like “wish”
And II also miss you so much after all this time .
wWell , Wwhat are your opinions about this plan?
And , if yYou wcant to bring a friend or someone ,else if you cwan t to.
Your sentence sounds odd, so combine it into one sentence without commas
I don't caremind/ I don’t really care about it .
Sound more gentle
I hope that you had been a goodpleasant time so far .
Please let me know as soon as possible forso I can booking a table there/in thate pub .
IHope to see you soon .
Try to sound more gentle and respectful
xoxo , Love,¶
Claire .
We use xoxo for very causal texts, emails or messages. Since you do not sound that casual to Alexa, I would refrain from using it.
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Good attempt! Though please try to strengthen your grammar as your sentences sound strange at this level. Do practice more!
An email to my friends . An email to my friend |
Hello Alexa. Hello Alexa |
How are you ? How are you |
, I am fine if you are asking yourself .
Since you are emailing your friend, it’s alright to use contractions |
I haven't been seeing us for five months . I have I hope this is what you are trying to say? |
It is a long time , for this reason , I had been thinking that we could made something special for this weekend , as long you had free time . It Since the event has not passed and you are sending an email, you use the present instead of the past tense |
I heard that this weekend , it will have a gig in downtown . I heard that this weekend , Not really understanding what you are saying, but I hope this is what you meant? |
A band is going to play in the new pub for it opening , and I believe , it will be amazing . A band is going to play in the new pub for it ‘s opening , and I believe |
As well as the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , that incluided a huge variality of mean , for instance , fish ,meat and delicious dessert making from a incriable famous chef . A |
I think that this plan can be really enjoy . I think that this plan can be really enjoy Since you are describing the plan, use an adjective instead of a verb |
what are you thinking ?
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On the other hand , We should to talk about our life , because , in this time , my live have been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live must have been changing much too . On the other hand , We should to talk more about our life , because , Using “need” may some forceful, so use more gentle words like “wish” |
And I miss you so much all this time .
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well , What are you opinion about this plan?
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And , if you want to bring someone , you can .
Your sentence sounds odd, so combine it into one sentence without commas |
I don't care it . I don't Sound more gentle |
I hope that you had been a good time so far . I hope that you had |
Please let me now as soon as possible for booking a table in that pub . Please let me know as soon as possible |
I see you soon .
Try to sound more gentle and respectful |
xoxo , Claire .
We use xoxo for very causal texts, emails or messages. Since you do not sound that casual to Alexa, I would refrain from using it. |
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