user1333's avatar
user1333

May 5, 2025

0
An email to my friends .

Hello Alexa.
How are you ? , I am fine if you are asking yourself .
I haven't been seeing us for five months . It is a long time , for this reason , I had been thinking that we could made something special for this weekend , as long you had free time .
I heard that this weekend , it will have a gig in downtown . A band is going to play in the new pub for it opening , and I believe , it will be amazing .
As well as the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , that incluided a huge variality of mean , for instance , fish ,meat and delicious dessert making from a incriable famous chef .
I think that this plan can be really enjoy .
what are you thinking ?
On the other hand , We should to talk about our life , because , in this time , my live have been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live must have been changing much too . And I miss you so much all this time .
well , What are you opinion about this plan?
And , if you want to bring someone , you can . I don't care it .
I hope that you had been a good time so far .
Please let me now as soon as possible for booking a table in that pub .
I see you soon .
xoxo , Claire .

Corrections

An email to my friends .

Hello Alexa.,

How are you ?

, I aI’m fine if you are asking yourself .me

Since you are emailing your friend, it’s alright to use contractions

I haven't been seeing us for not seen you for the past five months .

I hope this is what you are trying to say?

It ishas been a long time , for this reason and because of this, I hadve been thinking thatif we couldan madke something special for this weekend , as long you hadare free time .

Since the event has not passed and you are sending an email, you use the present instead of the past tense

I heard that this weekend , it will haveThere is a gig happening downtown .

Not really understanding what you are saying, but I hope this is what you meant?

A band is going to play in the new pub for it ‘s opening , and I believe ,that it will be amazing .

As well aslso, the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , thatwhich incluideds a huge varialiety of meanfood , for instance ,: fish ,meat and delicious dessert makingde from an incrediable famous chef .

I think that this plan can be really enjoy able.

Since you are describing the plan, use an adjective instead of a verb

wWhat aredo you thinking ?

On the other hand , We should to talk more about our life , because , inat this time , my livfe haves been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live musta lot, and I wish to talk to you about my day. You can also talk to me about your life since it may have been changing mucha lot too .

Using “need” may some forceful, so use more gentle words like “wish”

And II also miss you so much after all this time .

wWell , Wwhat are your opinions about this plan?

And , if yYou wcant to bring a friend or someone ,else if you cwan t to.

Your sentence sounds odd, so combine it into one sentence without commas

I don't caremind/ I don’t really care about it .

Sound more gentle

I hope that you had been a goodpleasant time so far .

Please let me know as soon as possible forso I can booking a table there/in thate pub .

IHope to see you soon .

Try to sound more gentle and respectful

xoxo , Love,¶
Claire .

We use xoxo for very causal texts, emails or messages. Since you do not sound that casual to Alexa, I would refrain from using it.

Feedback

Good attempt! Though please try to strengthen your grammar as your sentences sound strange at this level. Do practice more!

Similar_Elephant's avatar
Similar_Elephant

May 6, 2025

0

By the way, I made a mistake, it should be “happening in downtown”

An email to my friends .


An email to my friends .

Hello Alexa.


Hello Alexa.,

How are you ?


How are you ?

, I am fine if you are asking yourself .


, I aI’m fine if you are asking yourself .me

Since you are emailing your friend, it’s alright to use contractions

I haven't been seeing us for five months .


I haven't been seeing us for not seen you for the past five months .

I hope this is what you are trying to say?

It is a long time , for this reason , I had been thinking that we could made something special for this weekend , as long you had free time .


It ishas been a long time , for this reason and because of this, I hadve been thinking thatif we couldan madke something special for this weekend , as long you hadare free time .

Since the event has not passed and you are sending an email, you use the present instead of the past tense

I heard that this weekend , it will have a gig in downtown .


I heard that this weekend , it will haveThere is a gig happening downtown .

Not really understanding what you are saying, but I hope this is what you meant?

A band is going to play in the new pub for it opening , and I believe , it will be amazing .


A band is going to play in the new pub for it ‘s opening , and I believe ,that it will be amazing .

As well as the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , that incluided a huge variality of mean , for instance , fish ,meat and delicious dessert making from a incriable famous chef .


As well aslso, the owner of the pub is going to invite everyboday to a special dinner , thatwhich incluideds a huge varialiety of meanfood , for instance ,: fish ,meat and delicious dessert makingde from an incrediable famous chef .

I think that this plan can be really enjoy .


I think that this plan can be really enjoy able.

Since you are describing the plan, use an adjective instead of a verb

what are you thinking ?


wWhat aredo you thinking ?

On the other hand , We should to talk about our life , because , in this time , my live have been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live must have been changing much too .


On the other hand , We should to talk more about our life , because , inat this time , my livfe haves been changing so much , and I need to do you a update about my day , a same that you , since your live musta lot, and I wish to talk to you about my day. You can also talk to me about your life since it may have been changing mucha lot too .

Using “need” may some forceful, so use more gentle words like “wish”

And I miss you so much all this time .


And II also miss you so much after all this time .

well , What are you opinion about this plan?


wWell , Wwhat are your opinions about this plan?

And , if you want to bring someone , you can .


And , if yYou wcant to bring a friend or someone ,else if you cwan t to.

Your sentence sounds odd, so combine it into one sentence without commas

I don't care it .


I don't caremind/ I don’t really care about it .

Sound more gentle

I hope that you had been a good time so far .


I hope that you had been a goodpleasant time so far .

Please let me now as soon as possible for booking a table in that pub .


Please let me know as soon as possible forso I can booking a table there/in thate pub .

I see you soon .


IHope to see you soon .

Try to sound more gentle and respectful

xoxo , Claire .


xoxo , Love,¶
Claire .

We use xoxo for very causal texts, emails or messages. Since you do not sound that casual to Alexa, I would refrain from using it.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium