March 19, 2025
An email to a old friend
Hello Sarah
How are you ? i´m fine . we have been much time without seen each other . I´m asking myself , if you have some time for hang out together , because , we have to talk about our life and put on time about that .
I have so much thing to talk you about .
To other hand , the past weekend , i was an field located outside of the town , where we used to riding a horse and playing voleyball . Do you remenber that ? .
I hope that once day we can come back to do it , owing to , i had been forgotten that feeling when we rode a horse for the countryside and made some competition for watch which horse was the fastest .
I wish we will come back once day . It will be incrediable .
For other hand , i have to say you that the past day i was with James . Do you remember him ?
we were on him wedding two years ago . Unfortunally , he told me that he just divorced , It ´s a pity , I feel bad for him . I hope that he can out ahead .
To finally , I will be waiting your answer with a huge expectatition . I wish seen you soon and come back to spend a good time together .
I huge hug by you dear friend , Elisa . Good bye .
Hola Sarah .
¿ Cómo estas ? yo estoy bien , llevamos mucho tiempo sin vernos , y yo me preguntaba si tu tenías algo de tiempo libre para quedar juntas , porque , nosotras tenemos que hablar sobre nuestras vidas y ponernos al día con ellas .
Yo tengo que hablarte de muchas cosas .
Por otro lado , el pasado fin de semana , yo estuve en un campo a las afueras de la ciudad , donde nosotras solíamos montar a caballo y jugar a voleibol. ¿ Tú lo recuerdas ? . Yo espero volver a ir un día y hacer lo mismo , debido a que yo había olvidado el sentimiento de cuando nosotras montábamos a caballo y hacíamos competiciones para ver que caballo era el más rápido .
Yo deseo volver algún día , eso sería increíble .
Por otro lado , yo tengo que decirte que el pasado día yo estuve con James . ¿ Tu lo recuerdas ? , Nosotras estuvimos en su boda hace dos años . Desafortunadamente , el se acaba de divorciar , es una pena , yo me siento mal por el , Yo espero que el pueda salir hacia adelante .
Para finalizar , Yo estaré esperando con gran expectación tu respuesta . Deseo vernos pronto y volver a pasar un buen tiempo juntas .
Un gran abrazo de tu querida amiga , Elisa . Adiós
An email to a old friend
i´I'm fine .
we have been much time without seenIt's been a long time since we saw each other .
An alternative phrase if you know the person well "It's been a while".
I´'m asking myself ,wondering if you have some time forto hang out together , because , we have to talk about our life and put on time about that should catch up on what's been happening.
I'm not sure what you mean by "put on time about that" - do you mean 'make time'? Example - "We should make time to talk"
I have so much thing to talk to you about .
To other hand , the pFirstly, last weekend , iI was ain a field located outside of the town , where we used to riding ae horses and playing volleyball .
The events you describe are in the past, so for 'ride' and 'play' there is no need to add the '-ing'. Adding the '-ing' is for an action in the present, "I am riding a horse" means you are sat on a horse as you are speaking.
Do you remenmber that ?
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I wishhope we will comego back once day .
'Wish' and 'Hope' both mean 'to want something'. But 'Wish' means something that is unlikely or impossible to happen. 'Hope' means something that could happen, or is likely to happen.
If going back is unlikely or impossible, use 'could' not 'will'.
"I wish we could go back there one day" - Unlikely to happen, or impossible
"I hope we will go back there one day" - Could happen, likely to happen.
It will be incrediable .
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For other hand Secondly, iI have to saytell you that the pastrevious day iI was with James .
Do you remember him ?
wWe were onat hims wedding two years ago .
Unfortunaltely , he told me that he's just got divorced , It ´it's a pity , I feel bad for him .
I hope that he can out ahead come out of it well.
I think what you mean here is "I hope it works out for him".
To finally , I will be I awaiting your answer with a huge expectatinticipation .
I wishhope to seen you soon and you can come back to spendhave a good time together .
IA huge hug byfor you dear friend , Elisa .
Good bye .
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This is really good! Nice work!
Just remember, with punctuation, the comma (,) and full stop (.) comes straight after a word without a space.
March 20, 2025
Sorry, for the last line, I think you mean the hug came from you. So it should be "A huge hug from your dear friend, Elisa".
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Hello Sarah How are you ? |
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i´m fine .
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we have been much time without seen each other .
An alternative phrase if you know the person well "It's been a while". |
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I´m asking myself , if you have some time for hang out together , because , we have to talk about our life and put on time about that . I I'm not sure what you mean by "put on time about that" - do you mean 'make time'? Example - "We should make time to talk" |
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I have so much thing to talk you about . I have so much |
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To other hand , the past weekend , i was an field located outside of the town , where we used to riding a horse and playing voleyball .
The events you describe are in the past, so for 'ride' and 'play' there is no need to add the '-ing'. Adding the '-ing' is for an action in the present, "I am riding a horse" means you are sat on a horse as you are speaking. |
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I hope that once day we can come back to do it , owing to , i had been forgotten that feeling when we rode a horse for the countryside and made some competition for watch which horse was the fastest . I hope that on |
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I wish we will come back once day . I 'Wish' and 'Hope' both mean 'to want something'. But 'Wish' means something that is unlikely or impossible to happen. 'Hope' means something that could happen, or is likely to happen. If going back is unlikely or impossible, use 'could' not 'will'. "I wish we could go back there one day" - Unlikely to happen, or impossible "I hope we will go back there one day" - Could happen, likely to happen. |
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For other hand , i have to say you that the past day i was with James .
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we were on him wedding two years ago .
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Unfortunally , he told me that he just divorced , It ´s a pity , I feel bad for him . Unfortuna |
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I hope that he can out ahead . I hope that he can I think what you mean here is "I hope it works out for him". |
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To finally , I will be waiting your answer with a huge expectatition .
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I huge hug by you dear friend , Elisa .
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