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Aug. 26, 2022

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An email: Not being able to go to a party

Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well. I am glad to receive your invitation to go to this party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry because I cannot go there because I have much stuff to do.

At that day, I have an appointment with a company. They will conduct an interview to me for testing if I am qualified or not. You know, I will graduate from univeristy this year, and it will be the most important thing to me in such serious period. So I prioritize this thing and cannot go to such an excited party.

Do you mind to reschedule our appointment to next Sunday. I will be free after that since I will have been finishing all the interviews and also the work-searching. I will be a carzy guy who usually have fun with you after that.

I hope this email finds you well. Looking forward to your feedback~

Sincerely,
Your friend
James


Your friend Alex has invited you to a party this Saturday afternoon but you can’t go.


Write an email to Alex. In your email:


apologise to Alex
explain why you can’t go
suggest another day when you could meet.

Write your email in about 100 words.

Corrections

I am glad to receive your invitation to go to thise party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry becausethat I cannot go there because I have much stuff to do.

AtOn that day, I have an appointment with a company.

They will conduct an interview to me for testingwith me to see if I am qualified or not.

You know, I will graduate from univerisity this year, and it will beis the most important thing tofor me in such serious periodto do me right now.

So I will prioritize this thinge interview and cannot go to such an exciteding sounding party.

Do you mind to rescheduleing our appointment to next Sunday.?

I will be free after that since I will have been finishinged all the interviews and also the work-searchingthe job hunt.

After that, I will be a carthat crazy guy who usually have fun with you after thatyou can count on to have fun with.

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Great job!

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666coolboy

Aug. 31, 2022

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Thank you!

An email: Not being able to go to a party

Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well.

I am glapleased to receive your invitation to go to this party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry because I cannot go there because I have too much stuff to do.

AtOn that day, I have an appointment with a company.

They will conduct an interview to me for testing if I am qualified or not.

You know, I will graduate from univeristy this year, and it will be the most important thing tofor me in such seriouduring this period.

So I have to prioritize this thing and cannot go to such an excitedattend your party.

Do you mind to rescheduleing our appointment to next Sunday.

I will be free after thatSunday since I willould have been finishinged all the interviews and also the work-searchjob hunting.

I will be a carthat crazy guy who usually haves fun with you after that.

I hope this email finds you well.

Looking forward to your feedback~response.

Sincerely,

Your friend

James

666coolboy's avatar
666coolboy

Aug. 31, 2022

1

Thank you!

An email: Not being able to go to a party


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Dear Alex,


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I hope you are doing well.


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I am glad to receive your invitation to go to this party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry because I cannot go there because I have much stuff to do.


I am glapleased to receive your invitation to go to this party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry because I cannot go there because I have too much stuff to do.

I am glad to receive your invitation to go to thise party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry becausethat I cannot go there because I have much stuff to do.

At that day, I have an appointment with a company.


AtOn that day, I have an appointment with a company.

AtOn that day, I have an appointment with a company.

They will conduct an interview to me for testing if I am qualified or not.


They will conduct an interview to me for testing if I am qualified or not.

They will conduct an interview to me for testingwith me to see if I am qualified or not.

You know, I will graduate from univeristy this year, and it will be the most important thing to me in such serious period.


You know, I will graduate from univeristy this year, and it will be the most important thing tofor me in such seriouduring this period.

You know, I will graduate from univerisity this year, and it will beis the most important thing tofor me in such serious periodto do me right now.

So I prioritize this thing and cannot go to such an excited party.


So I have to prioritize this thing and cannot go to such an excitedattend your party.

So I will prioritize this thinge interview and cannot go to such an exciteding sounding party.

Do you mind to reschedule our appointment to next Sunday.


Do you mind to rescheduleing our appointment to next Sunday.

Do you mind to rescheduleing our appointment to next Sunday.?

I will be free after that since I will have been finishing all the interviews and also the work-searching.


I will be free after thatSunday since I willould have been finishinged all the interviews and also the work-searchjob hunting.

I will be free after that since I will have been finishinged all the interviews and also the work-searchingthe job hunt.

I will be a carzy guy who usually have fun with you after that.


I will be a carthat crazy guy who usually haves fun with you after that.

After that, I will be a carthat crazy guy who usually have fun with you after thatyou can count on to have fun with.

I hope this email finds you well.


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Looking forward to your feedback~


Looking forward to your feedback~response.

Sincerely,


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Your friend


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James


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