Sept. 28, 2022
An email: A homework project (details in notes)
Dear Jan,
I am Zeya, recently I was drawing a poster for a homework project. It takes me a long time and I meet some problems about design. So I write this email to you to request your help.
My poster is about being happiness without money, now I am confusing which words format and what kind of picture should I post in the poster.
You are a creative and experienced person, I believe you can help me with your wisdom.
I am free all this week for making this poster. Would you mind to have a meet with me in this week if you are free too. I hope I can do it under your guidance.
Best regards,
Yours
Zeya
You need some help with a poster you have to design for a homework project.
Write an email to your English friend, Jan. In your email:
say what your poster is about
explain how Jan can help you
suggest when you can meet.
Write your email in about 100 words
An email: A homework project (details in notes)
Dear Jan,
I am Zeya, and recently I was drawing a poster for a homework project.
It takesook me a long time and I meethad some problems aboutwith the design.
So I am writeing this email to you to request your help.
My poster is about being happinessy without money, now. I am confusinged on which words, format and what kind of picture I should I post idraw/ include on the poster.
You are a creative and experienced person, I believe you can help me with your wisdomsage advice.
I am free all this week for makingto draw this poster.
Would you mind to have a meet with me in this week if you are free tooIf you are free, would you be able to meet me this week.
I hope I can do it under your guidance( with your help).
Best regards,
Yours
Zeya
Sept. 29, 2022
Thank you！
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I am free all this week for making this poster.
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WIf you are fee, would you mind to have a meeting with me in this week if you are free too.?
Feedback
Overall I understood everything you were trying to say, and that's really important. The little errors didn't stop you from getting your point across.
Sept. 29, 2022
Thank you for encouraging!
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