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luna_jiang

Sept. 10, 2021

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An email

Dear David,
I'm glad to get your your email. Now, let me tell you something about my neighborhood, so that you won't be bored.
My neighborhood isn't very big, but it's comfortable and warm to me. All the people here are friendly. There are supermarkets on both sides of the road, where you can buy almost all kinds of everyday things. As for interesting places, I strongly recommend the awesome central park, which is only a short walk from my community and has various facilities.
By the way, Hangzhou(a city's name) has been super hot these days, so you'd better wear something cool.
I truly expect you to visit china soon.
Yours,
Luna

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An email

Dear David,

I'm glad to get your your emailhappy to hear from you.

Now, let me tell you something about my neighborhood, so that you won't be bored during your stay.

My neighborhood isn't very big, but I find it's comfortable and warm to me.

All the people here are friendly.

There are supermarkets on both sides of the road, where you can buy almost allny kinds of everyday thingsnecessity.

As for interesting places, I strongly recommend the awesome central park, which is only a short walk from my community and has various facilities.

By the way, Hangzhou(a city's name) has been super hot these days, so you'd better wear something cool.

I truly expect youhope that you are able to visit cChina soon.

Yours,

Luna

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Sounds like a nice place!

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luna_jiang

Sept. 11, 2021

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Thanks for your corrections!Hangzhou is really a nice place to visit!

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Dear David,


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I'm glad to get your your email.


I'm glad to get your your emailhappy to hear from you.

Now, let me tell you something about my neighborhood, so that you won't be bored.


Now, let me tell you something about my neighborhood, so that you won't be bored during your stay.

My neighborhood isn't very big, but it's comfortable and warm to me.


My neighborhood isn't very big, but I find it's comfortable and warm to me.

All the people here are friendly.


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There are supermarkets on both sides of the road, where you can buy almost all kinds of everyday things.


There are supermarkets on both sides of the road, where you can buy almost allny kinds of everyday thingsnecessity.

As for interesting places, I strongly recommend the awesome central park, which is only a short walk from my community and has various facilities.


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By the way, Hangzhou(a city's name) has been super hot these days, so you'd better wear something cool.


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I truly expect you to visit china soon.


I truly expect youhope that you are able to visit cChina soon.

Yours,


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Luna


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