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kyoko

Nov. 6, 2019

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An awesome day!

Today my close cousin and her cute daughter visited us.
Her daughter is only 1 year old.
Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,, everything charmed me so much!
My cousin has been wanted a baby boy, but she is two daughters’ mother.
So she always looks forward to seeing and playing with my son!
I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy each other! ;)

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Her daughter is only 1a year old.

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,,... everything charmed me so much!

My cousin has been wanteding a baby boy, but she is already a mother of two daughters’ mother. .

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kyoko

Nov. 8, 2019

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Thank you so much for correction!
Sometimes I still don’t know which to use “~’s something” or “something of ~” 🤔
I should study more!!

Today my closenearby cousin and her cute daughter visited us.


If you mean close as in distance. If not, ignore.

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,,... everything charmed me so much!

My cousin hasd been wanteding a baby boy, but now she ihas two daughters’ mother. .

I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy for each other!

"I've" is best if you want to imply that you want another baby (a girl)

You can use "I'd" if you want to express that you were hoping for a girl in the past, like your cousin hoped for a boy.

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kyoko

Nov. 6, 2019

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Thank you so much for correction and explain in detail!
My cousin doesn’t want more children at the present, and I want a baby.
So I understand I should use “she’d” and “I’ve”.
Thanks, I learned a lot😊✨

Her daughter is only 1 year old.

An awesome day!

Today my close cousin and her cute daughter visited us.

Her daughter is only 1 year old.

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,,... everything charmed me so much!

My cousin has been wanted a baby boy, but she ihas two daughters’ mother. .

So she always looks forward to seeing and playing with my son!

I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy to see each other!

;)

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kyoko

Nov. 8, 2019

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Thank you so much for your correction!🙏🏻✨

An awesome day!

Today my close cousin and her cute daughter visited us.

Her daughter is only 1 year old.

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,, everything charmed me so much!

My cousin has been wanteding a baby boy, but she is the mother of two daughters’ mother. ¶
.

So she always looks forward to seeing and playing with my son!

I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy for each other!

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kyoko

Nov. 6, 2019

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Thank you so much for correction!

An awesome day!


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Today my close cousin and her cute daughter visited us.


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Today my closenearby cousin and her cute daughter visited us.


If you mean close as in distance. If not, ignore.

Her daughter is only 1 year old.


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Her daughter is only 1a year old.

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,, everything charmed me so much!


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Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,,... everything charmed me so much!

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,,... everything charmed me so much!

Her smile, her little steps, her hugs,,,... everything charmed me so much!

My cousin has been wanted a baby boy, but she is two daughters’ mother.


My cousin has been wanteding a baby boy, but she is the mother of two daughters’ mother. ¶
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My cousin has been wanted a baby boy, but she ihas two daughters’ mother. .

My cousin hasd been wanteding a baby boy, but now she ihas two daughters’ mother. .

My cousin has been wanteding a baby boy, but she is already a mother of two daughters’ mother. .

So she always looks forward to seeing and playing with my son!


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I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy each other!


I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy for each other!

I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy to see each other!

I’ve really been wanting a baby girl, so we were so happy for each other!

"I've" is best if you want to imply that you want another baby (a girl) You can use "I'd" if you want to express that you were hoping for a girl in the past, like your cousin hoped for a boy.

;)


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