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An Auto Insurance
I went to the car dealership to renew my auto insurance. A young woman explained the documents to me. She had a very clear, steady gaze.
After I finished the contract, I mentioned that I was about to head off to apply for a passport.
With interest, she asked, “Where are you going?” When I answered, “The Czech Republic,” she said, “Lovely!”
From that moment, her expression softened, and our conversation began to flow naturally.
車の保険の更新手続きのため車屋に行った。若い女性が書類を説明してくれた。目がしっかりしている女性だった。契約が終わって、これから僕はパスポートの申請に行くんだと言った。彼女は「どこに行くんですか？」と興味深げに聞いてくるんで、「チェコだよ」と答えると「素敵！」と言ってきた。そこからはもう表情が柔らかくなって会話が弾んでいった。k
An Auto Insurance
This is a nitpicky correction but "Auto Insurance" is a more natural sounding title than "An Auto Insurance"
I went to the car dealership to renew my auto insurance.
A young woman explained the documents to me.
She had a very clear, steady gaze.
After I finished the contract, I mentioned that I was about to head off to apply for a passport.
With interest, she asked, “Where are you going?”
When I answered, “The Czech Republic,” she said, “Lovely!”
From that moment, her expression softened, and our conversation began to flow naturally.
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No notes on the text itself! I think you have nice style when writing and your cadence and word choice is also very nice. Keep up the good work!
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An Auto Insurance
This is a nitpicky correction but "Auto Insurance" is a more natural sounding title than "An Auto Insurance" |
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I went to the car dealership to renew my auto insurance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A young woman explained the documents to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She had a very clear, steady gaze. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After I finished the contract, I mentioned that I was about to head off to apply for a passport. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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With interest, she asked, “Where are you going?” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I answered, “The Czech Republic,” she said, “Lovely!” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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From that moment, her expression softened, and our conversation began to flow naturally. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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