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galoarellano1987

Aug. 26, 2024

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An amazing weekend

Last weekend was amazing, because I hang out with my children and my wife. It was very fun, we went to the Ferroviaria Park, in home practiced colors and geometric shapes with Sebastian. Also, Sebastian got hair cut and I think that he was very quiet and he tolerated noise and vibration of the hair machine.

The food at the weekend was delicious, We bought "bollos", "roaster chicken", "tuna" and others meals with delicious flavors.

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I take the wash, and today I feel my chest stronger, and my shoulders with pain.

In summary, it was a excellent weekend.

God is good.

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Last weekend was amazing, because I haung out with my children and my wife.

It was very fun, w. We went to the Ferroviaria Park, inand at home we practiced colors and geometric shapes with Sebastian.

Also, Sebastian got a hair cut and I think that h. He was very quiet and he tolerated noise and vibration of the hair machine.

The food we ate theis weekend was delicious,. We bought "bollos"," "roaster chicken"," "tuna," and others meals with delicious flavors.

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I take the wash, and twash. Today I feel my chest is stronger, and my shoulders with painare sore.

In summary, it was an excellent weekend.

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An aAmazing wWeekend

Last weekend was amazing, because I haung out with my children and my wife.

It was very fun, w. We went to the Ferroviaria Park, in and stayed at home practiceding colors and geometric shapes with Sebastian.

Also, Sebastian got a hair cut and I think that he was very quiet and he tolerated the noise and vibration of the hair machine.

For haircuts, clippers and scissors are the machines used to cut the hair. I think you are referring to clippers since those are the electric ones used on men.

The food at thethis weekend was delicious,. We bought "bollos", "roasterd chicken", "tuna", and others meals with delicious flavors.

Food does not need to be in quotations. “Bollos” can be put in quotations because it is a word from another language but it is not necessary because they are called that in English as well.

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I takeook the wash, and today I feel that my chest is stronger, and my shoulders with painhurt.

“I took the wash” does not make sense. I think you might be trying to say “I took (a shower/bath)” or “I washed myself.”

In summary, it was an excellent weekend.

God is good.

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galoarellano1987

Aug. 26, 2024

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Thanks for your advice

Last weekend was amazing, because I haung out with my children and my wife.

It was very fun, we went to the Ferroviaria Park, in homeand practiced colors and geometric shapes at home with Sebastian.

The original phrasing is a bit unclear. I believe it is describing two different and unconnected events, and the correction is made with that assumption.

Also, Sebastian got a hair cut and. I think that he was very quiet and he tolerated noise and vibration of the hair machine.

You could elect to use "got a haircut" or "got his hair cut". The first is a service one receives (the "haircut"), and the second is a simple verb/noun interaction (the hair was cut).
The entire construction is a run on sentence, which is common for casual speech, but would would best be broken up into sentences with more concise ideas. The period after "haircut" is just one way of many that it could be done.

The food atover the weekend was delicious, We bought "bollos", "roasterd chicken", "tuna", and others meals with delicious flavors.

The quotations around the food items in English are not necessary, but not incorrect.
• "other meals" or "others"

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I take the washwashed up, and today I feel my chest is stronger, and my shoulders with painhurt.

Staying most faithful to the sentence, I would say "before I washed up". This sounds slightly simplistic when compared to the rest of the paragraph. A more natural phrasing would be "before I took a shower" or "before I took a bath".

In summary, it was a excellent weekend.

God is good.

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Corrections made by native American English speaker.

An amazing weekend


An aAmazing wWeekend

Last weekend was amazing, because I hang out with my children and my wife.


Last weekend was amazing, because I haung out with my children and my wife.

Last weekend was amazing, because I haung out with my children and my wife.

Last weekend was amazing, because I haung out with my children and my wife.

It was very fun, we went to the Ferroviaria Park, in home practiced colors and geometric shapes with Sebastian.


It was very fun, we went to the Ferroviaria Park, in homeand practiced colors and geometric shapes at home with Sebastian.

The original phrasing is a bit unclear. I believe it is describing two different and unconnected events, and the correction is made with that assumption.

It was very fun, w. We went to the Ferroviaria Park, in and stayed at home practiceding colors and geometric shapes with Sebastian.

It was very fun, w. We went to the Ferroviaria Park, inand at home we practiced colors and geometric shapes with Sebastian.

Also, Sebastian got hair cut and I think that he was very quiet and he tolerated noise and vibration of the hair machine.


Also, Sebastian got a hair cut and. I think that he was very quiet and he tolerated noise and vibration of the hair machine.

You could elect to use "got a haircut" or "got his hair cut". The first is a service one receives (the "haircut"), and the second is a simple verb/noun interaction (the hair was cut). The entire construction is a run on sentence, which is common for casual speech, but would would best be broken up into sentences with more concise ideas. The period after "haircut" is just one way of many that it could be done.

Also, Sebastian got a hair cut and I think that he was very quiet and he tolerated the noise and vibration of the hair machine.

For haircuts, clippers and scissors are the machines used to cut the hair. I think you are referring to clippers since those are the electric ones used on men.

Also, Sebastian got a hair cut and I think that h. He was very quiet and he tolerated noise and vibration of the hair machine.

The food at the weekend was delicious, We bought "bollos", "roaster chicken", "tuna" and others meals with delicious flavors.


The food atover the weekend was delicious, We bought "bollos", "roasterd chicken", "tuna", and others meals with delicious flavors.

The quotations around the food items in English are not necessary, but not incorrect. • "other meals" or "others"

The food at thethis weekend was delicious,. We bought "bollos", "roasterd chicken", "tuna", and others meals with delicious flavors.

Food does not need to be in quotations. “Bollos” can be put in quotations because it is a word from another language but it is not necessary because they are called that in English as well.

The food we ate theis weekend was delicious,. We bought "bollos"," "roaster chicken"," "tuna," and others meals with delicious flavors.

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I take the wash, and today I feel my chest stronger, and my shoulders with pain.


Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I take the washwashed up, and today I feel my chest is stronger, and my shoulders with painhurt.

Staying most faithful to the sentence, I would say "before I washed up". This sounds slightly simplistic when compared to the rest of the paragraph. A more natural phrasing would be "before I took a shower" or "before I took a bath".

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I takeook the wash, and today I feel that my chest is stronger, and my shoulders with painhurt.

“I took the wash” does not make sense. I think you might be trying to say “I took (a shower/bath)” or “I washed myself.”

Also, I began to do 20 push-ups before I take the wash, and twash. Today I feel my chest is stronger, and my shoulders with painare sore.

In summary, it was a excellent weekend.


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In summary, it was an excellent weekend.

In summary, it was an excellent weekend.

God is good.


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The food at the weekend was delicious, We bought "bollos", "roaster chicken", "tuna" and others food with delicious flavors.


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