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An accident on the Yamanote Line
On the 16th of this month, the services of JR Yamanote Line was suspended for about eight hours due to a power outage. This was a very big probrem. Yamanote Line connects several stations with very hign numbers of passengers like Shinjuku, Shibuya, Ikebukuro, and Tokyo. Shinjuku is the busiest station in Japan. It is registered in the Guiness World Records as "the busiest railway station". Also, many railway lines in Tokyo metropolitan area operate througn services with other lines, so this accidents affects more than ten lines. I think Japanese trains runs very puntuctually and safely, but because of poluration concentration, the impact of a single accident is extremely big. According to reports, the accident affected about 670,000 people. It is also reportes that this suspendation casued extreme congestion on platforms of several stations, causing a situation that posed a serious risk to life. If you're curious, look at the picture in this article.
https://mainichi.jp/articles/20260116/k00/00m/040/031000c
今月16日、JR山手線は停電により約8時間にわたり運行を停止した。これは非常に大きな問題であった。山手線は新宿、渋谷、池袋、東京など乗客数が極めて多い複数の駅を結んでいる。新宿駅は日本で最も利用客の多い駅であり、「世界で最も利用客の多い鉄道駅」としてギネス世界記録に登録されている。また、首都圏の多くの鉄道路線は他路線との直通運転を行っているため、今回の事故は10路線以上に影響を及ぼした。日本の列車は非常に正確かつ安全に運行されていると思うが、路線の集中度が高いため、単一の事故の影響が極めて大きい。報道によれば、この事故は約67万人に影響を与えた。また、複数の駅のホームで深刻な混雑が発生し、生命に危険を及ぼす状況が生じたとも報じられている。興味があれば、この記事の写真を見てほしい。
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This was a very big probrlem.
The Yamanote Line connects several stations with very hign numbers of passengers likeh passenger numbers, including Shinjuku, Shibuya, Ikebukuro, and Tokyo.
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Shinjuku is the busiest station in Japan.
It is registered in the Guinness World Records as "the busiest railway station".
Also, many railway lines in the Tokyo metropolitan area operate througnh services with other lines, so thisese accidents affects more than ten lines.
I think Japanese trains runs very puntuctually and safely, but because of polluration concentration, the impact of a single accident is extremely big.
According to reports, the accident affected about 670,000 people.
It is also reportesd that this suspendation casued extreme congestion on platforms of several stations, causing a situation that posed a serious risk to life.
If you're curious, look at the picture in this article.
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An accident on the Yamanote Line
This sounds more natural |
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On the 16th of this month, the services of JR Yamanote Line was suspended for about eight hours due to a power outage. On the 16th The month is normally implied, especially if this is this month. |
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This was a very big probrem. This was a very big prob |
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Yamanote Line connects several stations with very hign numbers of passengers like Shinjuku, Shibuya, Ikebukuro, and Tokyo. The Yamanote Line connects several stations with very hig "including" is used for a list of nouns normally. Like is used for adjectives or verbs normally. |
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Shinjuku is the busiest station in Japan. Shinjuku is the busiest station in Japan. |
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It is registered in the Guiness World Records as "the busiest railway station". It is registered in the Guinness World Records as "the busiest railway station". |
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Also, many railway lines in Tokyo metropolitan area operate througn services with other lines, so this accidents affects more than ten lines. Also, many railway lines in the Tokyo metropolitan area operate throug |
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According to reports, the accident affected about 670,000 people. According to reports, the accident affected about 670,000 people. |
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It is also reportes that this suspendation casued extreme congestion on platforms of several stations, causing a situation that posed a serious risk to life. It is also reporte |
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If you're curious, look at the picture in this article. If you're curious, look at the picture in this article. |
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https://mainichi.jp/articles/20260116/k00/00m/040/031000c |
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I think Japanese trains runs very puntuctually and safely, but because of poluration concentration, the impact of a single accident is extremely big. I think Japanese trains run |
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