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jjorajj

May 24, 2020

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among sunflowers

when I was fifteen years old, I wanted to write a novel. I did not know about what. I had not any ideas, the only thing I knew it was that my novel would begin with an abandoned child sit among sunflowers... I'm twenty eight years old now and like that child, I'm abandoned, I'm alone in this world...

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wWhen I was fifteen years old, I wanted to write a novel.

I did not know about what.

I had notdidn't have any ideas,; the only thing I knew about it was that my novel would begin with an abandoned child sitting among sunflowers...

I'm twenty eight years old now and like that child, I'm abandoned,. I'm alone in this world...

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I'm sorry. :(

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Jack_MN

May 25, 2020

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There seem to be some good people on this site -- hopefully you will find that to be true, too.

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jjorajj

May 26, 2020

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thank you!!!

among sunflowers


when I was fifteen years old, I wanted to write a novel.


wWhen I was fifteen years old, I wanted to write a novel.

I did not know about what.


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I had not any ideas, the only thing I knew it was that my novel would begin with an abandoned child sit among sunflowers...


I had notdidn't have any ideas,; the only thing I knew about it was that my novel would begin with an abandoned child sitting among sunflowers...

I'm twenty eight years old now and like that child, I'm abandoned, I'm alone in this world...


I'm twenty eight years old now and like that child, I'm abandoned,. I'm alone in this world...

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