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Dec. 10, 2024

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Ambulances

Recently, a new ordinance regarding the use of ambulance has been enacted in my prefecture. Before, there was no charge for calling an ambulance in the case of sudden illness at night or on holidays, but in cases where medical staff determine that the situation is not urgent, an ambulance fee will be charged. Since some patients call an ambulance without much thought, the authority was urging the public to refrain from calling ambulances instead of taxis. I agree with this decision.

Actually, I have called an ambulance twice so far. One time was when I got hyperventilated during an argument with my husband. Another was when I was hit with a continuing stomach pain at midnight. I remember that my husband and I both got upset, but it was not anything too serious. We should have stayed calm and waited until the next day.

Amid rising prices and labor shortages, medical workers are now facing various problems. To cooperate with them, it would be better for those of us who are relatively healthy not to rely on ambulances too easily. Furthermore, we need to acquire medical knowledge to some extent and determine if our current condition is urgent or not. Well, if I don't mind dying at worst, I probably won't call an ambulance. It’s a joke though.


最近、私の県では救急車の利用に関する条例が施行されました。これまでは夜間や休日の急病の場合、救急車を呼んでも無料でしたが、医療従事者が緊急性がないと判断した場合は、救急車料金がかかります。県は軽率に救急車を呼ぶ患者もいるため、タクシーがわりに救急車を呼ぶのを控えるよう呼びかけていました。この決定には賛成です。

実は、私はこれまで2回救急車を呼んだことがあります。1回は夫と口論中に過呼吸になったとき。もう1回は夜中にひどい腹痛に襲われたときです。夫も私も動揺したのを覚えていますが、結果、大したことはありませんでした。落ち着いて翌日まで待てばよかったのです。

物価高騰や人手不足の中、医療従事者は今、さまざまな問題に直面しています。彼らに協力するためにも、比較的健康な私たちは、安易に救急車に頼らないほうがいいと思います。
さらには、ある程度の医学的知識を身につけ、自分の現在の状態が緊急であるかどうかを判断する必要があるでしょう。まあ、「最悪死んでもいいと」思ったら、私は救急車を呼ばないかな。冗談だけど。

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Ambulances提案:より正確なタイトルを追加する。 推奨タイトル: Ambulances in **** Prefecture

(The original title is vague.)

Recently, a new ordinance regarding the use of ambulance has been enacted in my prefecture.

よりスムーズな表現: Before, there was no charge for calling an ambulance in the case of sudden illness at night or on holidays, but in cases. However, from January 2025 wheren medical staff determine that the situation is not urgent,emergency exists an ambulance fee will be charged.

提案: 新しい法律がいつ発効するかを指定します。

Since some patients call aneople have made unnecessary ambulances calls without much thought, (the) authority was urgingies want to discourage the public to refrain from callusing ambulances instead ofas free medical taxis.

I agree with this decision.

Actually, I have called an ambulance twice so far.

One time was when I got hyperventilated during an argument with my husband.

Another was when I was hit with a continuing stomach pain at midnight.

SMOOTHER: I remember that my husband and I both got upset, but ithis was not anything too serious actual medical emergency.

We should have stayed calm and waited until the next day.

もっと自然に言えば: Amid rising prices and labor shortages, medical workers are now facing various problemsare understaffed and underpaid.

To cooperate with them, it would be better forlighten their burden, those of us who are relatively healthy not to rely onshould refrain from using ambulances too reasdily.

Furthermore, we need to acquire medical knowledge to some extent and determine if our current condition is urgent or not.

Well, if I don't mind dying at worstunless my medical situation is really dire, I probably won't call an ambulance.

It’s a joke though.SUGGESTION: Delete this sentence. (The previous sentence did not seem like a joke. Sometimes humor gets lost in translation.)

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Indeed. Medical expenses in Japan are rising and we need to refrain from over-using the medical system.

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ronpei

Dec. 10, 2024

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TNewfieldsさん、いつも丁寧に添削してくださってありがとうございます。数々の言い回しや単語、大変勉強になりました。

I remember that my husband and I both got upset, but it was not anything too serious.


SMOOTHER: I remember that my husband and I both got upset, but ithis was not anything too serious actual medical emergency.

We should have stayed calm and waited until the next day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Ambulances


Ambulances提案:より正確なタイトルを追加する。 推奨タイトル: Ambulances in **** Prefecture

(The original title is vague.)

Recently, a new ordinance regarding the use of ambulance has been enacted in my prefecture.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Before, there was no charge for calling an ambulance in the case of sudden illness at night or on holidays, but in cases where medical staff determine that the situation is not urgent, an ambulance fee will be charged.


よりスムーズな表現: Before, there was no charge for calling an ambulance in the case of sudden illness at night or on holidays, but in cases. However, from January 2025 wheren medical staff determine that the situation is not urgent,emergency exists an ambulance fee will be charged.

提案: 新しい法律がいつ発効するかを指定します。

I agree with this decision.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Actually, I have called an ambulance twice so far.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One time was when I got hyperventilated during an argument with my husband.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Another was when I was hit with a sever stomach pain at midnight.


Since some patients call an ambulance without much thought, the authority was urging the public to refrain from calling ambulances instead of taxis.


Since some patients call aneople have made unnecessary ambulances calls without much thought, (the) authority was urgingies want to discourage the public to refrain from callusing ambulances instead ofas free medical taxis.

Another was when I was hit with a continuing stomach pain at midnight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Amid rising prices and labor shortages, medical workers are now facing various problems.


もっと自然に言えば: Amid rising prices and labor shortages, medical workers are now facing various problemsare understaffed and underpaid.

To cooperate with them, it would be better for those of us who are relatively healthy not to rely on ambulances too easily.


To cooperate with them, it would be better forlighten their burden, those of us who are relatively healthy not to rely onshould refrain from using ambulances too reasdily.

Furthermore, we need to acquire medical knowledge to some extent and determine if our current condition is urgent or not.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, if I don't mind dying at worst, I probably won't call an ambulance.


Well, if I don't mind dying at worstunless my medical situation is really dire, I probably won't call an ambulance.

It’s a joke though.


It’s a joke though.SUGGESTION: Delete this sentence. (The previous sentence did not seem like a joke. Sometimes humor gets lost in translation.)

To cooperate with them, it’s better for those of us who are relatively healthy not to rely on ambulances too easily.


To cooperate with them, it would be better for those of us who are relatively healthy not to rely on ambulances too easily.


Amid rising prices and labor shortages, medical staff are now facing various problems.


Since some patients call an ambulance without much thought, the authority were urging the public to refrain from calling ambulances instead of taxis.


Furthermore, we need to acquire some medical knowledge and determine if our current condition is urgent or not.


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