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I ordered a pair of shoes on Amazon, and they arrived yesterday. Unfortunately, the size was too big. Since they were needed in a hurry, I immediately ordered the same pair in a smaller size and decided to return the larger ones. I thought I would have to take them to a delivery center, but it turned out I didn’t have to. Instead, I could just drop them off at a nearby convenience store. All I had to do was let the camera on the locker scan the QR code from Amazon’s email and put the item inside.
I dropped it off around noon, and by the evening, the refund had already been issued as Amazon gift credit. I was surprised at how quickly and easily something I thought would be a hassle was completed.
Now, I’m just waiting for the new pair to arrive. On Amazon’s website, I can even see a map showing where the delivery driver is. It says the order will arrive after three more stops. I think it’s an amazing service.
靴をアマゾンで注文した。昨日届いたが、あいにくサイズが大きすぎた。急いで必要なものだったので、昨日のうちに、一つ小さいサイズを注文し、届いたものは返品することにした。宅急便センターにもっていかなきゃいけないだろうと思っていたら、近所のコンビニのボックスについているカメラでQRコードを読み取らせ、商品を入れるだけでよかった。今日のお昼ごろにコンビニにもっていったのだが、アマゾンギフト券が夜にすでに入金されていた。めんどくさいとおもっていたことが、あっけなく終わってびっくりしている。 あとは、注文した靴が届くのを待つだけだ。アマゾンのページを見てみたら、今配送員がどこにいるかが地図上で表示された。あと3件後に届くらしい。いつ届くのかがわかる、素晴らしいサービスだと思う。
Amazon’s Amazing Return Service アマゾンの返却サービス
I ordered a pair of shoes on Amazon, and they arrived yesterday.
Comma not needed here
Unfortunately, the size wasy were too big.
While this isn't strictly wrong I would suggest wording it like this for a more natural flow
Since they wereI needed them in a hurry, I immediately ordered the same pair in a smaller size and decided to return the larger ones.
Another change for more natural flow
I thought I would have to take them to a delivery center, but it turned out I didn’t have to.
Instead, I could just drop them off at a nearby convenience store.
All I had to do was let the camera on the locker scan the QR code from Amazon’s email and put the item inside.
I dropped it off around noon, and by the evening, the refund had already been issued as Amazon gift credit.
The second comma here is not needed
I was surprised at how quickly and easily something I thought would be a hassle was completed.
Now, I’m just waiting for the new pair to arrive.
Comma not needed
On Amazon’s website, I can even see a map showing where the delivery driver is.
Comma should not be used here
It says the order will arrive after three more stops.
I think it’s an amazing service.
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Your writing is good and quite natural! There are a few too many commas in places that don't need them, so I'd suggest working on that in particular - but your meaning is clearly conveyed
Unfortunately, the size was too big. Unfortunately, the While this isn't strictly wrong I would suggest wording it like this for a more natural flow |
I dropped it off around noon, and by the evening, the refund had already been issued as Amazon gift credit. I dropped it off around noon, and by the evening The second comma here is not needed |
I was surprised at how quickly and easily something I thought would be a hassle was completed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Now, I’m just waiting for the new pair to arrive. Now Comma not needed |
On Amazon’s website, I can even see a map showing where the delivery driver is. On Amazon’s website Comma should not be used here |
It says the order will arrive after three more stops. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I think it’s an amazing service. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Amazon’s Amazing Return Service アマゾンの返却サービス This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I ordered a pair of shoes on Amazon, and they arrived yesterday. I ordered a pair of shoes on Amazon Comma not needed here |
Since they were needed in a hurry, I immediately ordered the same pair in a smaller size and decided to return the larger ones. Since Another change for more natural flow |
I thought I would have to take them to a delivery center, but it turned out I didn’t have to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Instead, I could just drop them off at a nearby convenience store. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
All I had to do was let the camera on the locker scan the QR code from Amazon’s email and put the item inside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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