Aug. 6, 2021
Am I in a dream?
My friend David lowkey has 5 flats in this city. Because of the covid-19, he has to run his company with a skeleton crew. He always finds himself woke up early around 5 in the morning and is easy to get salty. One night, he woke up earlier than usual and the moon was shedding light through the window. It seemed there was noise at the door but he was not sure. By this time he had been completely awake. He listened carefully however, he failed to concentrate and fell asleep again. Why? I don’t know. Sometimes he has that kind of dream which is so real that you ask your self ‘Am I in a dream?’ and then you answer yourself ‘ Yes, I am.’
Am I in a dream?
My friend David lowkey has 5 flats in this city.
Because of the covid-19, he has to run his company with a skeleton crew.
He always finds himself woke upawake early around 5 in the morning and it is easy to get salty.
One night, he woke up earlier than usual and the moon was shedding lightmoonlight was streaking through the window.
Your original sentence is correct but a better of way of phrasing it is like so
It seemed there was noise at the door but he was not sure.
By this time he had beenwas completely awake.
He listened carefully, however, he failed to concentrate and fell asleep again.
Why?
I don’t know.
Sometimes he has that kind of dream which is so real that you ask your self ‘Am I in a dream?’ and then you answer yourself ‘ Yes, I am.’
Aug. 8, 2021
Thanks a lot. That's very detailed correction.
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Am I in a dream? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My friend David lowkey has 5 flats in this city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because of the covid-19, he has to run his company with a skeleton crew. Because of |
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He always finds himself woke up early around 5 in the morning and is easy to get salty. He always finds himself |
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One night, he woke up earlier than usual and the moon was shedding light through the window. One night, he woke up earlier than usual and Your original sentence is correct but a better of way of phrasing it is like so |
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It seemed there was noise at the door but he was not sure. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By this time he had been completely awake. By this time he |
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He listened carefully however, he failed to concentrate and fell asleep again. He listened carefully, however |
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Why? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don’t know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes he has that kind of dream which is so real that you ask your self ‘Am I in a dream?’ and then you answer yourself ‘ Yes, I am.’ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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