July 12, 2022
Alternative medicines range from a broad spectrum of treatments and procedures falling outside of the mainstream of traditional healthcare, which is strictly based on the scientific method. This presentation will argue the appeal, safety as well as efficacy of alternative medicines.
Being popped up as the best option instead of the toxic chemical drugs these therapies have spread as a wealthy business pushed by practitioners and pharmaceutical companies. Homoeopathy, acupuncture, chiropractic, and herbal medicines are clearly supposed to be preferred by many patients and also by a large fraction of physicians because people believe they are absolutely safe, aren't they?
Though the popular idea quoted is that natural is safe, well actually this is not always the case, since herbal medications and drugs often share the very same active ingredient, which occasionally can even be poisoning - like foxglove (digitalis purpurea) and deadly nightshade (belladonna) - particularly depending on the dosage, that is known in the pharmaceutical and variable in the herboristic prescription.
The scientific literature still presents a low amount of evidence on the efficacy of these approaches because of the lack of scientific validation according to the evidence-based medicine best practice, for instance, most of the studies are affected by bias or anecdotal. However, we must admit that in the last 20 years a surge of interest in this field has been detected.
In conclusion, although alternative medicines are becoming more and more popular, unfortunately, there is not enough evidence supporting what they are claimed to be - safer and more efficient than traditional medicine. This presentation provided some highlights on the issue. It is our opinion that further studies may eventually shed a light on this scientific field.
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This presentation will argue the appeal,for the safety as well as efficacy of alternative medicines.
Being popped up as the best option instead of the toxic chemical drugs these therapies have spread as a wealthy business pushed by practitioners and pharmaceutical companies.
Not clear what you are saying here. I don't know what you mean by "being popped up."
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You are saying here that physicians prefer these medicines because people believe they are safe. That's why physicians prefer them? Don't you mean that people prefer them because physicians believe they are safe?
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The scientific literature still presents a low amount of evidencere is still not much evidence in the scientific literature on the efficacy of these approaches because of the lack of scientific validation according to the evidence-based medicine best practice, for instance, most of the studies are affected by bias or anecdotal. evidence. (This sentence is circular: you are saying there is not much evidence because there is a lack of evidence. )
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However, we must admit that in the last 20 years a surge of interest in this field has been detectsurged.
Or, "there has been an increased interest in this field"
In conclusion, although alternative medicines are becoming more and more popular, there is, unfortunately, there is not enough evidence supporting what they are claimed to bthe claim that they are - safer and more efficient than traditional medicine.
This presentation provided some highlights on the issue.
It is our opinion that further studies may eventually shed a light on this scientific field.
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Good job on a difficult writing task. since you are packing a lot of information in each sentence, I would suggest that you carefully proofread to make sure the meaning of each is clear.
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Alternative medicines range from a broad spectrum of treatments and procedures falling outside of the mainstream of traditional healthcare, which is strictly based on the scientific method. Alternative medicines range from a broad spectrum of treatments and procedures which fall when you use "range" you need to specify the range: from a (the beginning of the range) to b (the end of the range) |
This presentation will argue the appeal, safety as well as efficacy of alternative medicines. This presentation will argue the |
Being popped up as the best option instead of the toxic chemical drugs these therapies have spread as a wealthy business pushed by practitioners and pharmaceutical companies. Being popped up as the best option instead of the toxic chemical drugs these therapies have spread as a wealthy business pushed by practitioners and pharmaceutical companies. Not clear what you are saying here. I don't know what you mean by "being popped up." |
Homoeopathy, acupuncture, chiropractic, and herbal medicines are clearly supposed to be preferred by many patients and also by a large fraction of physicians because people believe they are absolutely safe, aren't they? Homoeopathy, acupuncture, chiropractic, and herbal medicines are clearly You are saying here that physicians prefer these medicines because people believe they are safe. That's why physicians prefer them? Don't you mean that people prefer them because physicians believe they are safe? |
Though the popular idea quoted is that natural is safe, well actually this is not always the case, since herbal medications and drugs often share the very same active ingredient, which occasionally can even be poisoning - like foxglove (digitalis purpurea) and deadly nightshade (belladonna) - particularly depending on the dosage, that is known in the pharmaceutical and variable in the herboristic prescription.
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The scientific literature still presents a low amount of evidence on the efficacy of these approaches because of the lack of scientific validation according to the evidence-based medicine best practice, for instance, most of the studies are affected by bias or anecdotal. The in the phrase "affected by bias or anecdotal" you are combining a noun, "bias" with and adjective "anecdotal". |
However, we must admit that in the last 20 years a surge of interest in this field has been detected. However, we must admit that in the last 20 years Or, "there has been an increased interest in this field" |
In conclusion, although alternative medicines are becoming more and more popular, unfortunately, there is not enough evidence supporting what they are claimed to be - safer and more efficient than traditional medicine. In conclusion, although alternative medicines are becoming more and more popular, there is, unfortunately, |
This presentation provided some highlights on the issue. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It is our opinion that further studies may eventually shed a light on this scientific field. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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