Feb. 12, 2024
Alternating Vision
Today, in a local church gathering, I noticed an old man who sat next to me could both look into the distance and read small fonts on his smartphone.
I said to him that I found he had a good eye condition at his age, and inquired if he practiced any specific exercises. I once saw similar cases among table tennis enthusiasts. Surprisingly, he revealed he only has alternating vision. His two eyes significantly differed in vision. He uses his right eye for objects in the distance and his left eye for close objects.
I'd like to highlight that people with alternating vision may not always do well in certain circumstances. For example, it's a bit difficult for them to focus on objects when driving. Their eyes are more likely to fatigue. Therefore, I suggest people with this condition do not drive for a long time. Of course, I haven't given any suggestions to him directly, as it's probably not polite for me to give any suggestions to someone I just met.
Alternating Vision
Today, in a local church gathering, I noticed an old man who sat next to me that could both looklook both into the distance and read small fonts on his smartphone at the same time.
"At the same time" offers clarity.
I said to him that I found he had a good eye condition ats for his age, and I inquired if he practiced any specific exercises.
"Good eye condition" isn't very natural sounding but is grammatically correctly. Personally, I would add in "I" before "inquired" for clarity.
I once saw similar cases among table tennis enthusiasts.
Surprisingly, he revealed he only has alternating vision.
His two eyes significantly differed in vision.
He uses his right eye for objects in the distance and his left eye for close objects.
I'd like to highlight that people with alternating vision may not always do well in certain circumstances.
For example, it's a bit difficult for them to focus on objects when driving.
Their eyes are more likely to fatigue.
Therefore, I suggest people with this condition shouldo not drive for a long time.
"Should" works better than "do", especially in a scenario referring to a piece of advice that might impact one's safety.
Of course, I haven't given any suggestions to him directly, as it's probably not polite for me to give any suggestions to someone I just met.
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Very great job! Your writing is very intriguing and makes me want to learn more about your experiences at church. Maybe you'll have other church stories to share in the future!
Feb. 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and kind words. I am considering going to church once a week if I could.
Alternating Vision
Today, inat a local church gathering, I noticed an old man who sat next to me could both looksee into the distance and read small fonts on his smartphone.
I said to him that I found he had a good eye condition at his age, and inquired if he practiced any specific exercises.
Alternatively, "he had good eyesight at his age" also works, which sounds more natural to hear in a conversation.
I once saw similar cases among table tennis enthusiasts.
Surprisingly, he revealed he only has alternating vision.
His two eyes significantly differed in vision.
He uses his right eye for objects in the distance and his left eye for close objects.
Therefore, I suggest people with this condition dto not drive for a long time.
Of course, I haven't given any suggestions to him directly, as it's probably not polite for me to give any suggestions to someone I just met.
Feb. 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Alternating Vision
Today, inat a local church gathering, I noticed anthe old man who sat next to me could both looksee into the distance and read small fonts on his smartphone.
I said to him that I found he had a good eye condition at his age, and inquired if he practiced any specific exercises.
I once saw similar cases among table tennis enthusiasts.
Surprisingly, he revealed he only has alternating vision.
His two eyes significantly differed in vision.
I'd like to highlight that people with alternating vision may not always do well in certain circumstances.
For example, it's a bit difficult for them to focus on objects when driving.
Their eyes are more likely to fatigue.
Therefore, I suggest people with this condition do not drive for a long time.
Of course, I haven't given any suggestions to him directly, as it's probably not polite for me to give any suggestions to someone I just met.
Feb. 12, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
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