This week I completely forgot a few important “things”.

Thatere was meeting friends, a part -time job…

I retotally forgot that!

People don't really say "really forgot." The adverbs that go with "forget" are usually "totally" and "completely."

But at the last momentinute, an angel coames and reminded me.

Use the past simple here.

Hence, I managed to show up and don’idn't make a fool of myself.

The “angel” iwas a man or woman.

Like last night was my part -time job night.

Or, "Last night, I worked a shift for my part-time job."

Since I wasI completely forgot about that.

When Iile I was sitting ion the bus on my way go homethe way home, the couple sitting in front of me was talking about their troubles at work.

Not a complete sentence - combine with the next one.

The couple sitting in front was talk about their troubles at work.

Their voices reminded me, that I haved a part -time job to do.

So, I immediately get ouot off the bus and gowent to my work place on time.

You get on a bus, then you sit on the bus, then you get off the bus.