July 23, 2021
All you need is luck.
2 months ago, I buy 4 stocks.
Actually, I would say after many years of study about investment.
Finally, 2 months ago I suddenly actually put my money into stock market.
The 4 stocks that I buy is blue chip stocks.
The risk of losing money almost zero.
But the surprise news is that one of the stocks go up nearly 20%.
That is a big win!
Am I happy? Yes!
But that is just pure luck!
Even I am full of knowledge about stock market.
The day that I buy this stock I never know it will go up that quickly!
A smart man won’t make a lot of money.
A lucky man will make a lot of money.
2Two months ago, I buy 4ought four stocks.
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Actually, I would say I bought the stocks after many years of study abouting investment.
Finally, 2two months ago, I suddenly actually put my money into the stock market.
The 4four stocks that I buy isI bought are blue chip stocks.
The risk of losing money is almost zero.
But the surpriseing news is that one of the stocks gohas gone up nearly 20%.
That is a big win!
Am I happy?
Yes!
But that is just pure luck!
Even I am full of knowledge about stock markethough I know much about the stock market, I never thought the value of that stock would go up quickly when I bought it.
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All you need is luck. |
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2 months ago, I buy 4 stocks.
In most house styles, the numbers zero to nine are spelled out, numerals are used for 10 or more. Numbers are not used at the beginning of sentences. |
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Actually, I would say after many years of study about investment. Actually, I would say I bought the stocks after many years of study |
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Finally, 2 months ago I suddenly actually put my money into stock market. Finally, |
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The 4 stocks that I buy is blue chip stocks. The |
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The risk of losing money almost zero. The risk of losing money is almost zero. |
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But the surprise news is that one of the stocks go up nearly 20%. But the surpris |
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That is a big win! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Am I happy? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But that is just pure luck! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even I am full of knowledge about stock market. Even |
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The day that I buy this stock I never know it will go up that quickly! |
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A smart man won’t make a lot of money. |
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A lucky man will make a lot of money. |
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