Aug. 22, 2024
All the glass in the world has disappeared
I am trying to get into the habit of writing every day. I accomplished my goal of taking the IELTS exam and getting a decent score, but I still want to improve my skills. That is the reason I was looking for a book with a bunch of writing ideas. One of the topics I found was this question: what would happen if all the glass in the world disappeared?
I think the world will not change much. Many of the products that are made of glass can easily be replaced with another material, like plastic. In fact, I remember that when I was younger, I frequently saw soda in glass bottles, but now it is uncommon and plastic has replaced the material. Probably a significant change with the disappearing of glass will be the windows. All the windows I see are made of glass, but in that case, probably with current technology we are able to replace everything. The only thing that would be impossible to substitute will be natural resources.
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All the glass in the world has disappeared
I am trying to get into the habit of writing every day.
I accomplished my goal of taking the IELTS exam and getting a decent score, but I still want to improve my skills.
That is the reason I was looking for a book with a bunch of writing ideas.
One of the topics I found was this question: what would happen if all the glass in the world disappeared?
I think the world willould not change much.
“Would” is used since this is a hypothetical scenario.
Many of the products that are made of glass can easily be replaced with another material, like plastic.
In fact, I remember that when I was younger, I frequently saw soda in glass bottles, but now it is uncommon and plastic has replaced the material.
Probably aA significant change with the disappearing of glass willould probably be the windows.
I’ve moved “probably” in a place where I think it flows better.
All the windows I see are made of glass, but in that case, probably with current technology, we are probably able to replace everything.
Same feedback as previous sentence.
The only thing that would be impossible to substitute willould be natural resources.
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