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DobleD54

Sept. 29, 2024

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All about working hours data.

This is my journal of all the things that I learn every day.
Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measured working hours, in this point we focus in the surveys. The surveys often are the best way to have excellent information. Almost the majority of the time the survey classify in three types: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys. In my opinion the best surveys are the labor force surveys, provides a huge amount information, I rather this type of survey than others because collect data of employments status. But this surveys only cover residents above certain age in the majority of the countries.
Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on this types of surveys.
To finalize I want to said that is necessary for future studies have available information about this topics, if we have more data the gaps will be reduce, However I want to motivate everyone to still researching of this topic, nonetheless never stop off we even work more hard.


Este es mi diario de todas las cosas que aprendo cada día.
Ayer leí sobre cómo los estudios recopilan datos para hacer buenas investigaciones sobre las horas de trabajo medidas, en este punto nos centramos en las encuestas. Las encuestas a menudo son la mejor manera de tener información excelente. Casi la mayoría de las veces, las encuestas se clasifican en tres tipos: encuestas de fuerza laboral, encuestas de establecimientos y encuestas de uso del tiempo. En mi opinión, las mejores encuestas son las encuestas de fuerza laboral, brindan una gran cantidad de información, prefiero este tipo de encuesta a otras porque recopilan datos sobre el estado del empleo. Pero estas encuestas solo cubren a los residentes que superan cierta edad en la mayoría de los países.
Las encuestas de establecimientos recopilan datos sobre el empleo y las horas de trabajo según lo informado por los empleadores, lo que brinda información granular sobre las horas de trabajo, por lo que confiamos en este tipo de encuestas.
Para finalizar, quiero decir que es necesario que los estudios futuros tengan disponible información sobre estos temas, si tenemos más datos, las brechas se reducirán, sin embargo, quiero motivar a todos a seguir investigando sobre este tema, no obstante, nunca dejemos de trabajar aún más duro.

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All about working hours data.

Alternatively you could say "All about data on working hours" to clarify the meaning because I was confused for a little bit initially.

This is my journal of all the things that I learn every day.

Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measured working hours, i. In this point we will focus ion the surveys.

I think "the studies" would be used more so if you were trying to talk about a specific group of studies, instead of the idea of studies as a whole.
"Recollect" is used more with remembering things.
"Make good investigations concerning measured working hours" doesn't really sound right, although I'm not entirely sure how you could improve it except for changing it to say "collect data to investigate working hours". But in this case the meanings feel slightly different.
"Point" also doesn't really sound like the best word. You could say "text" instead.
You would say that you focus on something, not in something.
Saying "focus" without another verb in front feels kind of weird. Usually would would say something like "we are focusing", "we will focus" or "we are going to focus". The only situation where it would sound right to not have another verb is in the past tense, where you would say "we focused".

The sSurveys often are the best way to have excellentgather good information.

"The surveys" would be used if you were analysing a specific collection of surveys.
It sounded a little weird saying "to have excellent information".

Almost the majorityMajority/Most/A lot of the time the, surveys are classifyied in three typeways: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.

I suggested another two words/phrases that you could use instead of "majority". You wouldn't really say "almost" before one of those words. The closest idea I can think of is saying "nearly/almost all the time", in which case you could also choose to say what I've suggested above.
"Classify" would be used if you were talking about the surveys classifying something, which would likely be information. You would typically use "ways" instead of "types" with surveys.
You could also say "There are usually three types of surveys: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys."

In my opinion the best surveys are the labor force surveys, as they provides a huge amount information,. I rathprefer this type of survey thanover others because they collect data ofn employments status.

Personally, I prefer using "prefer" over "rather".
"Provides a huge amount of information" feels like something you might right in a dot point, or with "it" in front. Since you're talking about a plural ("surveys"), you would say "they provide...". In order to make the two flow together in the same sentence, I chose "as" but you could also use "because".

But thisese surveys only cover residents above a certain age in the majority of themost countries.

"Surveys" is plural, so you would use "these". "This" would be used with a singular noun, like "this survey" or "this type of survey".
You would typically need "a" or "an" when talking about ages in this context.
"In most countries" sounds more natural than "in the majority of the countries".

Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on thisese types of surveys.

"Granularity" is a noun, but since you have a noun immediately afterwards ("information"), you would need to use an adjective ("granular").
You could also say "this type of survey".

To finalize I want to saidy that it is necessary for future studies to have available information about thison these topics, i. If we have more data, the gaps will be reduce,d. However I want to motivate everyone to stillcontinue researching of this topic, nonethelessand to never stop off we even work moreworking hard.

"Said" is used in the past tense.
You would need a subject before "is necessary", so "it" would be the best choice here. You could also say "Having available information on these topics is necessary for future studies", but this is a bit more of a complex sentence.
"Reduce" in that exact form would not be used after "will be".
"Continue researching" is a lot more natural than "still research".
You don't need to use "of" after "research" when it's used as a verb ("researching" in this case). You could say "conduct research on..." though.
The last part sounded really unnatural, so I think "and to never stop working hard" expresses the same idea but with slightly better wording.

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DobleD54

Oct. 1, 2024

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Thanks for the corrections.

All about working hours data.

This is my journal of all the things that I learn every day.

Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measured working hours, in this point measured. On this matter, we focus in theon surveys.

The sSurveys often are the best way to have excellent information.

Almost the majorityall of the time the, surveys are classifyied into three types: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.

In my opinion, the best surveys are the labor force surveys,. They provides a huge amount of information,. I'd rather use this type of survey than others, because it can collect data of employments status.

But thisese surveys only cover residents above a certain age in the majority of themost countries.

Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on this types of surveys.

To finalize, I want to saidy that it is necessary for future studies to have available information available about thisese topics, i. If we have more data, the gaps will be reduced, However, I want to motivate everyone to still researching ofn this topic, nonethelessand never stop off we eveneven if we need to work more harder.

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DobleD54

Oct. 1, 2024

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Thanks for the corrections, I'll Improve.

This is my journal of all the things that I learn every day.

Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measurede working hours, i. In this point we fost I will discuss in these surveys.

The sSurveys often are the best way to have excellent information.

Almost the majority of the time the surveySurveys can usually be classifyied into three types: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.

In my opinion the best surveys are the labor force surveys, which provides a huge amount information,. I rathprefer this type of survey thano the others because they collect data ofn employments status.

But thisese surveys only cover residents above a certain age in the majority of themost countries.

Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on this types of surveys.

To finalize I want to saidy that it is necessary for future studies to have available information about thisese topics, i. If we have more data, the gaps in our understanding will be reduce, Howeverd. I want to motivate everyone to stillcontinue researching of this topic, nonetheless never stop off we even work more hard.

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DobleD54

Oct. 1, 2024

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Thanks for the corrections, I'll Improve.

All about working hours data.


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All about working hours data.

Alternatively you could say "All about data on working hours" to clarify the meaning because I was confused for a little bit initially.

This is my journal of all the things that I learn every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measured working hours, in this point we focus in the surveys.


Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measurede working hours, i. In this point we fost I will discuss in these surveys.

Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measured working hours, in this point measured. On this matter, we focus in theon surveys.

Yesterday I read about how the studies recollect data to make good investigations concerning measured working hours, i. In this point we will focus ion the surveys.

I think "the studies" would be used more so if you were trying to talk about a specific group of studies, instead of the idea of studies as a whole. "Recollect" is used more with remembering things. "Make good investigations concerning measured working hours" doesn't really sound right, although I'm not entirely sure how you could improve it except for changing it to say "collect data to investigate working hours". But in this case the meanings feel slightly different. "Point" also doesn't really sound like the best word. You could say "text" instead. You would say that you focus on something, not in something. Saying "focus" without another verb in front feels kind of weird. Usually would would say something like "we are focusing", "we will focus" or "we are going to focus". The only situation where it would sound right to not have another verb is in the past tense, where you would say "we focused".

The surveys often are the best way to have excellent information.


The sSurveys often are the best way to have excellent information.

The sSurveys often are the best way to have excellent information.

The sSurveys often are the best way to have excellentgather good information.

"The surveys" would be used if you were analysing a specific collection of surveys. It sounded a little weird saying "to have excellent information".

But this surveys only cover residents above certain age in the majority of the countries.


But thisese surveys only cover residents above a certain age in the majority of themost countries.

But thisese surveys only cover residents above a certain age in the majority of themost countries.

But thisese surveys only cover residents above a certain age in the majority of themost countries.

"Surveys" is plural, so you would use "these". "This" would be used with a singular noun, like "this survey" or "this type of survey". You would typically need "a" or "an" when talking about ages in this context. "In most countries" sounds more natural than "in the majority of the countries".

Almost the majority of the time the survey classify in three types: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.


Almost the majority of the time the surveySurveys can usually be classifyied into three types: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.

Almost the majorityall of the time the, surveys are classifyied into three types: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.

Almost the majorityMajority/Most/A lot of the time the, surveys are classifyied in three typeways: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys.

I suggested another two words/phrases that you could use instead of "majority". You wouldn't really say "almost" before one of those words. The closest idea I can think of is saying "nearly/almost all the time", in which case you could also choose to say what I've suggested above. "Classify" would be used if you were talking about the surveys classifying something, which would likely be information. You would typically use "ways" instead of "types" with surveys. You could also say "There are usually three types of surveys: labor force surveys, establishment surveys, and time use surveys."

In my opinion the best surveys are the labor force surveys, provides a huge amount information, I rather this type of survey than others because collect data of employments status.


In my opinion the best surveys are the labor force surveys, which provides a huge amount information,. I rathprefer this type of survey thano the others because they collect data ofn employments status.

In my opinion, the best surveys are the labor force surveys,. They provides a huge amount of information,. I'd rather use this type of survey than others, because it can collect data of employments status.

In my opinion the best surveys are the labor force surveys, as they provides a huge amount information,. I rathprefer this type of survey thanover others because they collect data ofn employments status.

Personally, I prefer using "prefer" over "rather". "Provides a huge amount of information" feels like something you might right in a dot point, or with "it" in front. Since you're talking about a plural ("surveys"), you would say "they provide...". In order to make the two flow together in the same sentence, I chose "as" but you could also use "because".

Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on this types of surveys.


Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on this types of surveys.

Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on this types of surveys.

Establishment surveys collect data on employment and working hours as reported by employers, giving granularity information on working hours, so we rely on thisese types of surveys.

"Granularity" is a noun, but since you have a noun immediately afterwards ("information"), you would need to use an adjective ("granular"). You could also say "this type of survey".

To finalize I want to said that is necessary for future studies have available information about this topics, if we have more data the gaps will be reduce, However I want to motivate everyone to still researching of this topic, nonetheless never stop off we even work more hard.


To finalize I want to saidy that it is necessary for future studies to have available information about thisese topics, i. If we have more data, the gaps in our understanding will be reduce, Howeverd. I want to motivate everyone to stillcontinue researching of this topic, nonetheless never stop off we even work more hard.

To finalize, I want to saidy that it is necessary for future studies to have available information available about thisese topics, i. If we have more data, the gaps will be reduced, However, I want to motivate everyone to still researching ofn this topic, nonethelessand never stop off we eveneven if we need to work more harder.

To finalize I want to saidy that it is necessary for future studies to have available information about thison these topics, i. If we have more data, the gaps will be reduce,d. However I want to motivate everyone to stillcontinue researching of this topic, nonethelessand to never stop off we even work moreworking hard.

"Said" is used in the past tense. You would need a subject before "is necessary", so "it" would be the best choice here. You could also say "Having available information on these topics is necessary for future studies", but this is a bit more of a complex sentence. "Reduce" in that exact form would not be used after "will be". "Continue researching" is a lot more natural than "still research". You don't need to use "of" after "research" when it's used as a verb ("researching" in this case). You could say "conduct research on..." though. The last part sounded really unnatural, so I think "and to never stop working hard" expresses the same idea but with slightly better wording.

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