Feb. 28, 2020
Alita: Battle Angel (part 2)
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The story begin with a broad image to the all city called Iron city where live the poor people and the other city suspended on the air called Zalem. In the middle of that sky city, there's a hole where the technological garbage falling over a mountain every day. Near of the big garbage mountain there was a man walking around of it. Searching new android pieces for his experiments and for his work because he is a mechanic who repairs androids and with that, he wins his life. One of those pieces he found it was a robotic head without their body but kept the brain completely healthy. The head was hurt but the face was well and it toke big eyes on the face. Ido the man, took the head and corroborated it was lived and yes it was!!
Then of that he repaired the head, put his a new body and then named it Alita.
Alita: Battle Angel (pPart 2)
The story begin with a broad image to the allof a city called Iron cCity, where live the poor people andlive, and Zalem, the other city suspended oin the air called Zalem.
In the middle of that sky city, there's a hole where the technological garbage fallings over a mountain every day.
Near of the big garbage mountain, there was a man walking around of it.
SHe is searching for new android pieces for his experiments and for his work because he is a mechanic who repairs androids and with that, he wins his life.
One of those pieces he found it was a robotic head without their body, but kept the brain was completely healthy.
The head was hurt , but the face was wellokay, and it tokehad big eyes on theits face.
Ido tThe man, Ido, took the head and corroborated it was livedhecked that it was still living, and yes it was!
Then of that he repaired the head, put hisit on a new body, and then named it Alita.
Alita: Battle Angel (part 2)
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The story begins with a broad image to the all city called Iron city, where live the poor people and the live and another city suspended oin the air called Zalem.
In the middle of that sky city, there's a hole where all the technological garbage falling over atrash falls and piles onto a garbage mountain every day.
Near of the big garbage mountain there was a man walking around of it.,
Ssearching for new android pieces for his experiments and for his work, because he is a mechanic who repairs androids and with that, he wins his lifefor a living.
One of those pieces he found it was a robotic head without theirits body, but kept the brain was completely healthy.
The head was hurt damaged but the face was well and it toke, with big eyes on theits face.
Ido tThe man, took the head and corroborated it was lived and yes it wasmanaged to salvage it!
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Then of that hHe repaired the head, put hismounted it onto a new body and then named it Alita.
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interesting story :) how irresponsible of the sky island though, pouring garbage just like that, haha
March 2, 2020
Ido tThe man, took the head and corroborated it was lived and yes it wasmanaged to salvage it!
Thanks to corrected me. But in that sentence i wanted to say that Ido (the mechanic) wanted to investigate or knows if the head kept with life. For that reason i used "corroborated". Though now i think and i could have used: "he wanted to know".
March 2, 2020
And yes, the story is amazing. There's a movie called Alita Battle Angel if you like the science fiction, I recommend it you
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The story begin with a broad image to the all city called Iron city where live the poor people and the other city suspended on the air called Zalem. The story begins with a The story begin with a broad image |
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In the middle of that sky city, there's a hole where the technological garbage falling over a mountain every day. In the middle of that sky city, there's a hole where all the technological In the middle of that sky city, there's a hole where the technological garbage fall |
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Near of the big garbage mountain there was a man walking around of it. Near Near |
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Searching new android pieces for his experiments and for his work because he is a mechanic who repairs androids and with that, he wins his life.
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One of those pieces he found it was a robotic head without their body but kept the brain completely healthy. One of th One of th |
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The head was hurt but the face was well and it toke big eyes on the face. The head was The head was hurt |
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Ido the man, took the head and corroborated it was lived and yes it was!
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Then of that he repaired the head, put his a new body and then named it Alita.
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