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drtdavid

Feb. 28, 2020

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Alita battle angel

Three days ago I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it's inspired in manga called Gunmm wrote by Yukito Kishiro. The story is veeery interesting because talked about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken. I mean it don't seems like the typical future where everybody is rich and there's a lot technology on everywhere.
There's two places. One of them is the earth where the poor people work for win the bread of the every day and the other place is the heaven where there's a floating island where live the rich people.
The story turn around to the main character named Alita who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and she lost her memory. She have to save the humanity which is prisoner from a crazy scientific man named Nova who is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and make a lot experiment with humans and androids.

In next posts i going write about the all movie with details.

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Three days ago I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it's inspired inby a manga called Gunmm wroitten by Yukito Kishiro.

The story is veeery interesting because it talked about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

I mean it doesn't seems like the typical future where everybody is rich and there's a lot of technology on everywhere.

One of them is the earth where the poor people work for win the bread of the every dayto make their daily bread and the other place is the heaven where there's a floating island where live the rich people live.

"earn your daily bread"/"breadwinner" is the phrase you are looking to employ. Variation of this phrase is acceptable.

The story turn around tofollows the main character named Alita who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and shewho lost her memory.

She haves to save the humanity which is prisoner fromheld captive by a crazy scientificst man named Nova who is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and make a lot experiment a lot with humans and androids.

In the next posts iI am going to write about the allentire movie with details.

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Jack_MN

Feb. 28, 2020

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Good job

Three days ago I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it's inspired inby a manga called Gunmm, wroitten by Yukito Kishiro.

The story iwas veeery interesting because talkedit was about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

I mean, it dowasn't seems like the typical futurefuture is typically portrayed, where everybody is rich and there's a lot technology on everywhere.

There's two places.

One of them is the earth where everyday, the poor people must work forto win their bread of the every day and; the other place is theconsidered heaven whereand there's a floating island where live the rich people.

The story turn around tofocuses on the main character named Alita, who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and shewho lost her memory.¶
or¶
The story focuses on an android(human brain with a robotic body) named Alita, who
lost her memory.

She have tomust save the humanity, which is has been imprisoner fromd by a crazy scientific manst named Nova who. He is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and make a lotpreform experiment withs on humans and androids.

In the next posts i I am going to write about the all movie withof the movie in more details.

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xeta

Feb. 28, 2020

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Woah, this is a super cool post!! Nice work, your English is great!
I have seen "Alita: Battle Angel" and I loved it.
It was awesome!
I can't believe it left off like that, so I'm patiently awaiting a super cool sequel.
I'd like to also read the manga if I can find it.
It was a really great movie!

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drtdavid

Feb. 28, 2020

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jajajaj Yeah, the final was pretty good!! James Cameron is the best.
All the story is really amazing.

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xeta

Feb. 28, 2020

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The story iwas veeery interesting because talkedit was about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

Sorry I forgot to add a correction:
"...where the world and (the) civilization seem(s) broken..." You don't need "the" because you've already placed it before "world".
And the "s" on the end of "seem" isn't needed it this sentence.
Couldn't think of how to explain 'why' properly, so I found this( ̄▽ ̄):

Verbs should be influenced by the subjects in the sentence. For the first and second person subjects, the following verbs take the root form when the sentence is the present tense. When the subject is a third person singular, however, the verb takes the form of ‘root + (e)s’ in the present tense. Some examples are ‘I go to school,’ ‘You go to school,’ and ‘He goes to school.’

So, the following examples will be correct.

It seems that you look smart.
You seem to look smart.
It seems that he is happy.
He seems to be happy.

Whether you use ‘seem’ or ‘seems’ should be decided by the subject and tense. If the subject of the sentence is the third person singular with present tense, please use ‘seems’ and in all other cases, use ‘seem’ in the present tense.
Author: Sun Cheol Cheong, knows English Link: https://www.quora.com/When-should-we-use-the-words-%E2%80%9Cseem%E2%80%9D-and-%E2%80%9Cseems%E2%80%9D

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xeta

Feb. 28, 2020

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jajajaj Yeah, the final was pretty good!! James Cameron is the best. All the story is really amazing.

I knoww, I felt so bad though, that "you know who" ended up the way he did, not fair, but his fault. (T_T) Who is James Cameron?(I'm not great at remebering actors.. hehe)
Yes, it definitely was. It was amazing.

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drtdavid

March 2, 2020

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I knoww, I felt so bad though, that "you know who" ended up the way he did, not fair, but his fault. (T_T) Who is James Cameron?(I'm not great at remebering actors.. hehe) Yes, it definitely was. It was amazing.

jajaja totally. Well he wont to get to Salem...
James Cameron was the director by Avatar and he wrote the Allita script.

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xeta

March 2, 2020

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jajaja totally. Well he wont to get to Salem... James Cameron was the director by Avatar and he wrote the Allita script.

Yup. ;-; Well, maybe he ended up like that because he put his own dreams and desires before his "love?" for Alita. Oh well..
He's the director then? Scratch that, I'm not good at remembering real people having to do with movies in general. xP Ohh, that's pretty cool!

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drtdavid

March 2, 2020

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jajaja yeah. He is a dumb. Remember he rejected the Alita heart.
And he don't. James Cameron weren't the director only were a helper and gave to the director some advice

Alita b: Battle aAngel

Three days ago, I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it'. It was inspired inby a manga called Gunmm, which was wroitten by Yukito Kishiro.

The story is veeery interesting because it talked about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

I don't mean it don't seems like the typical future where everybody is rich and there's a lot of technology on everywhere.

There's two places.

One of them is the eEarth, where the poor people work forto win the bread of the every day, and the other place is the hHeaven, where there's a floating island where live the rich people live.

The story turn around tofocuses on the main character named Alita, who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and shewho lost her memory.

She haves to save the humanity which is prisoner from a crazy scientific man named Nova who is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and makeconducts a lot experiment with humans and androids.

In next posts i, I'm going write about the all movie with all the details.

Alita battle angel


Alita b: Battle aAngel

Three days ago I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it's inspired in manga called Gunmm wrote by Yukito Kishiro.


Three days ago, I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it'. It was inspired inby a manga called Gunmm, which was wroitten by Yukito Kishiro.

Three days ago I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it's inspired inby a manga called Gunmm, wroitten by Yukito Kishiro.

Three days ago I watched a science fiction movie called Alita which it's inspired inby a manga called Gunmm wroitten by Yukito Kishiro.

The story is veeery interesting because talked about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.


The story is veeery interesting because it talked about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

The story iwas veeery interesting because talkedit was about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

The story is veeery interesting because it talked about a strange retro future where the world and the civilization is seems like broken.

I mean it don't seems like the typical future where everybody is rich and there's a lot technology on everywhere.


I don't mean it don't seems like the typical future where everybody is rich and there's a lot of technology on everywhere.

I mean, it dowasn't seems like the typical futurefuture is typically portrayed, where everybody is rich and there's a lot technology on everywhere.

I mean it doesn't seems like the typical future where everybody is rich and there's a lot of technology on everywhere.

There's two places.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One of them is the earth where the poor people work for win the bread of the every day and the other place is the heaven where there's a floating island where live the rich people.


One of them is the eEarth, where the poor people work forto win the bread of the every day, and the other place is the hHeaven, where there's a floating island where live the rich people live.

One of them is the earth where everyday, the poor people must work forto win their bread of the every day and; the other place is theconsidered heaven whereand there's a floating island where live the rich people.

One of them is the earth where the poor people work for win the bread of the every dayto make their daily bread and the other place is the heaven where there's a floating island where live the rich people live.

"earn your daily bread"/"breadwinner" is the phrase you are looking to employ. Variation of this phrase is acceptable.

The story turn around to the main character named Alita who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and she lost her memory.


The story turn around tofocuses on the main character named Alita, who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and shewho lost her memory.

The story turn around tofocuses on the main character named Alita, who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and shewho lost her memory.¶
or¶
The story focuses on an android(human brain with a robotic body) named Alita, who
lost her memory.

The story turn around tofollows the main character named Alita who is an android (human brain with robotic body) and shewho lost her memory.

She have to save the humanity which is prisoner from a crazy scientific man named Nova who is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and make a lot experiment with humans and androids.


She haves to save the humanity which is prisoner from a crazy scientific man named Nova who is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and makeconducts a lot experiment with humans and androids.

She have tomust save the humanity, which is has been imprisoner fromd by a crazy scientific manst named Nova who. He is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and make a lotpreform experiment withs on humans and androids.

She haves to save the humanity which is prisoner fromheld captive by a crazy scientificst man named Nova who is like "God" because he can control the people with his technology and make a lot experiment a lot with humans and androids.

In next posts i going write about the all movie with details.


In next posts i, I'm going write about the all movie with all the details.

In the next posts i I am going to write about the all movie withof the movie in more details.

In the next posts iI am going to write about the allentire movie with details.

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