July 20, 2021
Alexa
I bought a smart speaker the other day: Amazon Alexa. Since I read the news that Amazon workers were listening to conversations with Alexa, I had already decided what I would first say to it: "Alexa, put a curse upon Amazon workers who are eavesdropping on me."
先日スマートスピーカを購入した。Amazonのアレクサだ。アマゾンの従業員がアレクサとの会話を聴いているというニュースを読んだことがあったので、最初にアレクサに言うことは決まっていた。「アレクサ、私を盗聴しているAmazonの従業員に呪いをかけて」
Alexa
I bought a smart speaker the other day:, an Amazon Alexa.
What you wrote with a colon was correct, but this way the sentence flows better and will seem more normal.
Since I read in the news that Amazon workers were listening to conversations with Alexa, I had already decided what I would first say to it: "Alexa, put a curse upon Amazon workers who are eavesdropping on me."
More typical to say “in the news” instead of just “the news”
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Good job, your English is great! My only corrections were style, not technical
July 20, 2021
Thank you for the corrections!
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I bought a smart speaker the other day: Amazon Alexa. I bought a smart speaker the other day What you wrote with a colon was correct, but this way the sentence flows better and will seem more normal. |
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Since I read the news that Amazon workers were listening to conversations with Alexa, I had already decided what I would first say to it: "Alexa, put a curse upon Amazon workers who are eavesdropping on me." Since I read in the news that Amazon workers were listening to conversations with Alexa, I had already decided what I would first say to it: "Alexa, put a curse upon Amazon workers who are eavesdropping on me." More typical to say “in the news” instead of just “the news” |
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