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Write an email to a friend. Write your feelings about the notice and suggest possible alternatives.
Hi Pauline,
How are you these days? I hope you’re going well. Have you heard about the newest club’s notice? Honestly, i felt suprised and frustrated that they decide to increse membership fees and close the gym than usual for the next weeks! I don’t like it at all because you know i’m a busy woman and just available afte 5p.m. Besides, i have just inscript to their new yoga course just one week ago. If i knew it sooner, i’d rather choose the gym near to my house than this.
Your friend,
Harriet.

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Gym club

Write an email to a friend.

Write your feelings about the notice and suggest possible alternatives.

Have you heard about the newest club’s notice?

Your friend, Harriet.

Gym club


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Write an email to a friend.


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Write your feelings about the notice and suggest possible alternatives.


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Hi Pauline, How are you these days?


Hi Pauline, How are you these days? Hi Pauline, How are you these days?

I hope you’re going well.


I hope you’re gdoing well. I hope you’re doing well.

Have you heard about the newest club’s notice?


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Honestly, i felt suprised and frustrated that they decide to increse membership fees and close the gym than usual for the next weeks!


Honestly, iI felt suprised and frustrated that they decide to incresase the membership fees and close the gym earlier than usual for the next weeks! Honestly, I felt suprised and frustrated that they decide to increase the membership fees and close the gym earlier than usual for the next weeks!

I don’t like it at all because you know i’m a busy woman and just available afte 5p.m.


I don’t like it at all because you know i’I'm a busy woman and just available only after 5 p.m. I don’t like it at all because you know I'm a busy woman and available only after 5 p.m.

Besides, i have just inscript to their new yoga course just one week ago.


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If i knew it sooner, i’d rather choose the gym near to my house than this.


If i knewI had known it sooner, i’dI would have rather choose the gym near to my house than this. If I had known it sooner, I would have rather chose the gym near to my house than this.

Your friend, Harriet.


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