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Exhausted

I was exhausted today.
As usual, I go hiking every morning.
It takes about an hour to reach the top.
It takes about half an hour to go down the mountain.
I'm a big hiker, and I like hiking.
I didn't practice Tai Chi but I walk for exercise.
I walk every day and I feel that my leg muscles have become stronger.


今天我累坏了。
和往常一样,我每天早上都会去徒步。
到达山顶大约需要一个小时。
下山需要大约半小时。
我是热爱爬山的人,而且我特别喜欢徒步。
我没练习太极,但我通过散步来锻炼身体。
我每天都走路,我觉得我的腿部肌肉变得更强壮了。

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Corrections

I'm a big hiker, and I like hiking.

‘i’m a big hiker’ and ‘i like hiking’ are essentially the same thing, so it makes more sense to just say one of these phrases, not both.

I didn'on’t practice Tai Chi but I walk for exercise.

‘don’t’ instead of ‘didn’t’ as this sentence is in the present tense.

Exhausted


I was exhausted today.


As usual, I go hiking every morning.


It takes about an hour to reach the top.


It takes about half an hour to go down the mountain.


I'm a big hiker, and I like hiking.


I'm a big hiker, and I like hiking.

‘i’m a big hiker’ and ‘i like hiking’ are essentially the same thing, so it makes more sense to just say one of these phrases, not both.

I didn't practice Tai Chi but I walk for exercise.


I didn'on’t practice Tai Chi but I walk for exercise.

‘don’t’ instead of ‘didn’t’ as this sentence is in the present tense.

I walk every day and I feel that my leg muscles have become stronger.


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