Jan. 15, 2023
Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy. Of course if you pay a high price than you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century. But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least the ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.
There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item. However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviable choice. So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well. it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.
Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, we found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands. What's more, it was on sale. We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier. We take out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression a little bit astonished by the amount. With his reaction, I noticed that customers around us should think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do. I encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I corrected each time. But here it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treat the ingredients, so all I could do was imagining how others were thinking of us at that moment.
A journeytrip to find rice
A trip to find rice
Living in France means obtafinding rice is not always easy.
Living in France means finding rice is not always easy.
Of course, if you pay a higher price than, you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.
Of course, if you pay a higher price, you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.
But a commoner like me needs to find anthe option available as cheap as possible, or at least the ones only slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.
But a commoner like me needs to find the option as cheap as possible, or at least the one only slightly more expensive than the one I used to buy in my home country.
There is a brand that I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the customer service of a in the supermarket which sells this item.
There is a brand that I have been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the customer service in the supermarket which sells this item.
However, last month, after opening it, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviablea poor choice.
However last month, after opening it, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice, making the brand a poor choice.
So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product that is safe enough to consume. So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product that is safe enough to consume.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use that rice for other recipes as well.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, Japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use that rice for other recipes as well.
it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.
it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even though the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.
Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped byat, we found one rice brand of rice that was cheap enough to meet our demands.
Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped at, we found one brand of rice that was cheap enough to meet our demands.
What's more, it was on sale.
We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted toat was 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.the checkout.
We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total that was 10kg), and we proceeded to the checkout.
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We placed all the bags of rice in front of the cashier who made an expression of astonished by the number of bags.
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Considering his reaction, I noticed that customers around us would think that we were going to make tons of sushi because, after all that's what Japanese people do.
I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, whichand I corrected it each time.
I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, and I correct it each time.
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But in this instance, it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would use the ingredients, so all I could do was to imagine what the others were thinking about us at that moment.
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A Journey to Find Rice
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Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy.
Of course if you pay a high price thaen you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.
Of course if you pay a high price then you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.
But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least theones onesly slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.
But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least ones only slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.
There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a the supermarket which sells ithis item.
There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of the supermarket which sells it.
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Last month, however, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening it, making the brand an unviable choice.
We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.
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We were then forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", t." That is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, Japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi." That is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.
We capitalize the first letter of all words related to a country and nationality.
it is a staple of diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the wWesterniszation of taste.
it is a staple of diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even though the consumption is declining gradually due to the Westernization of taste.
"Westernization" is how we spell it in the US.
Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, we found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.
What's more, it was on sale.
We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.
We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg) and proceeded to a cashier.
We takeook out all the bags of rice, and, at that point, the cashier made an expression as if he were a little bit astonished by the amounthow much we were buying.
We took out all the bags of rice and, at that point, the cashier made an expression as if he were a little bit astonished by how much we were buying.
With his reaction, I noticed that the customers around us should thinkprobably thought that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.
With his reaction, I noticed that the customers around us probably thought that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people do.
I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I have corrected each time. I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I have corrected each time.
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Here, however, it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would use the ingredients, so all I could do was imagine what others were thinking of us in that moment.
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Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy.
Of course, if you pay a high price, thaen you wcould get it for sure, like for most of the commodities in thise 21st century.
Of course, if you pay a high price, then you could get it for sure, like for most commodities in the 21st century.
But a commoner like me needs to find an option available that is as cheap as possible, or at least the ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.
But a commoner like me needs to find an option available that is as cheap as possible, or at least ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.
There is a brand thatfrom which I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.
There is a brand from which I have been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.
“and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.“
I’m sorry, but I’m unsure as regards to what you mean here.
However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand rice bags, which made the brand for us an unviable choice.
However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening the rice bags, which made the brand for us an unviable choice.
So we were forced to embark upon a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume. So we were forced to embark upon a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is, "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, Japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is, "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.
“Japanese” and names of all other nationalities/languages are always capitalized.
iIt is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption of it is declining gradually due to the wWesternisation of culinary taste.
It is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even though the consumption of it is declining gradually due to the Westernisation of culinary taste.
Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, weMe and my husband stopped by at a supermarket today and found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.
Me and my husband stopped by at a supermarket today and found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.
What's more, —it was on sale.
What's more—it was on sale.
We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag containweighed 500g, so in total, the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.
We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag weighed 500g, so in total, the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.
We takeook out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression that was a little bit astonished by the amount we were buying.
We took out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression that was a little bit astonished by the amount we were buying.
With his reaction, I noticrecalled that customers around us shwould think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.
With his reaction, I recalled that customers around us would think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.
I encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I corrected each time.
But here it would be weirdhave been strange to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was imagininge how others were thinking of us at that moment.
But here it would have been strange to start talking about our dinner or how we would use the ingredients, so all I could do was imagine how others were thinking of us at that moment.
To me, “strange” frankly sounds more natural than “weird”, maybe because weird might be used more often in informal contexts.
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Good job. I’m glad that you were able to find more affordable rice.
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There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because od it's modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item. |
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However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviable choice.
However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening the
We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.
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So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe to consume. |
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In France, if it's not an Asian store, japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, “Japanese” and names of all other nationalities/languages are always capitalized.
In France, if it's not an Asian store, We capitalize the first letter of all words related to a country and nationality.
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it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.
it is a staple of diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even though "Westernization" is how we spell it in the US.
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Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, we found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.
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What's more, it was on sale.
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We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.
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But here it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treat the ingredients, so all I could do was imagining how others were thinking of us at that moment.
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