The activities related tof building a cultural city are finished and I have some thoughts. The activities related to building a cultural city are finished and I have some thoughts.

The division of labor ofamong our five-person team is clear-ocut and each one is charged with specific responsibilities. The division of labor among our five-person team is clear-cut and each one is charged with specific responsibilities.

Rather than "each one is charged with specific responsibilities." it would be more natural to say "each one is responsible for specific tasks"

We act strictly followinged the instructions of higher authority's instructions and never dared to slack off. We strictly followed the higher authority's instructions and never dared to slack off.

We act strictly following the instructions of a higher authority and never dared to slack off. We act strictly following the instructions of a higher authority and never dare to slack off.

The staff of the grass-level community are really hard at workers, they get up early and go to bed late, even though they don’t have high salaries. The staff of the grass-level community are really hard workers, they get up early and go to bed late, even though they don’t have high salaries.

Their attitude towards work is worth learning from. Their attitude towards work is worth learning from.

Their attitude towards work is worth learning from. Their attitude towards work is worth learning from.

The community’s work conditions are really goodmuch better than we used to thought and it waswere better than ours. The community’s work conditions are much better than we thought and were better than ours.

The community’s work conditions are really goodbetter than we used to thought and it was better than ours. The community’s work conditions are better than we thought and better than ours.

This shows that Fuyang is developing too fast. This shows that Fuyang is developing fast.

The comprehensive quality of all the staff of the community's staff is high and they are very young, very energetic, and very educated. The comprehensive quality of the community's staff is high and they are very young, energetic, and educated.

Using "very" three times sounds repetitive.

The comprehensive quality of all the staff of the community's staff is high and they are very young, very energetic and very educated. The comprehensive quality of all of the community's staff is high and they are very young, very energetic and very educated.

The facts* overturned our conventional imaginexpectations. The facts* overturned our conventional expectations.

*"facts" is okay, but "reality" sounds better.

Building a cultural city is a giant project and it needs* our joint efforts. Building a cultural city is a giant project and it needs* our joint efforts.

*"needs" is okay, but "requires" sounds better.

We should start with ourselves, at. At the very least, we don’shouldn't litter. We should start with ourselves. At the very least, we shouldn't litter.

We should start with ourselves, by at least, we don’ not littering. We should start with ourselves by at least not littering.