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Playing TV Game

Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought new TV game software named 3D mario world.
I play it's TV game with my daughter. The first game of this game series was released by 1983. When I was childhood, I played this game series with my friends. So, I enjoyed the game with sweet sense of deja vu.

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Thank you for your comment. Thank you for sharing your paraphrase of "deja vu"!

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Playing TV Game


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Playing a TV Game Playing a TV Game

Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought new TV game software named 3D mario world.


Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought new TV game softwarvideo game named 3D mario world. Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought new video game named 3D mario world.

Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new TVvideo game software namcalled 3D mMario wWorld. Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new video game software called 3D Mario World.

If you say "named" people would still understand what you mean, but "called" would more commonly be used in this context. In English, proper nouns are always capitalized and the title of a video game would be considered a proper noun.

Because I was ill and had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new TVvideo game software namcalled _3D mMario wWorld_. Because I was ill and had to stay home, I bought a new video game called _3D Mario World_.

or Because I was sick and had to stay home, I bought a new video game called _3D Mario World_.

Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new TVvideo game software named 3D mario world. Because I had to stay at home due to illness, I bought a new video game software named 3D mario world.

I play it's TV game with my daughter.


I play it's TVed the video game with my daughter. I played the video game with my daughter.

I play it's TVthe video game with my daughter. I play the video game with my daughter.

I play it's TV game with my daughter. I play it with my daughter.

I play it's TVthe video game with my daughter. I play the video game with my daughter.

The first game of this game series was released by 1983.


The first game of this game series was released byin 1983. The first game of this series was released in 1983.

Saying series instead of game series sounds more natural.

The first game of this game series was released byin 1983. The first game of this game series was released in 1983.

The first game of this game series was released byin 1983. The first game of this series was released in 1983.

When I was childhood, I played this game series with my friends.


When I wasDuring my childhood, I played this game series with my friends. During my childhood, I played this series with my friends.

When I was a childhood, I played this game series with my friends. When I was a child, I played this game series with my friends.

You can either say "when I was a child" or "During my childhood"

When I was a childhood, I played ithis game series with my friends. When I was a child, I played it with my friends.

When I was a childhood, I played this game series with my friends. When I was a child, I played this game series with my friends.

So, I enjoyed the game with sweet sense of deja vu.


So, I enjoyed the game with a sweet sense of dejaéjà vu. So, I enjoyed the game with a sweet sense of déjà vu.

This one turned into a French correction haha.

So, I enjoyed the game with a sweet sense of deja vu. So, I enjoyed the game with a sweet sense of deja vu.

So, I enjoyed the latest game with a sweet sense of deja vu. So I enjoyed the latest game with a sweet sense of deja vu.

So, I enjoyed the game with sweet sense of deja vu.nostalgia So, I enjoyed the game with sweet sense of nostalgia

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