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milkyway

Dec. 1, 2022

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Air Show

I live in Aichi Prefecture.
Last Saturday, I went to see an air show that held to commemorate the 150th anniversary of the birth of Aichi Prefecture.
Five planes flew around while drawing lines like circles or a big heart and so on.
Unfortunately, it was a cloudy thus these white lines did’t stand out.
There were many beautiful a rehearsal day’s photos on SNS because it was more sunny.
It was a shame, but it was a good experience.


愛知県が誕生して150周年になるのを記念して航空ショーがあったので見に行きました。
飛行機が円やハートなどの線を描いて飛びました。
残念ながら白い雲が多くて白い線はあまり目立ちませんでした。
前日の予行演習の方が晴れてたので、綺麗な写真がSNSに上がってました。
残念でしたが、良い経験でした。

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Air Show

I live in Aichi Prefecture.

Last Saturday, I went to see an air show that was held to commemorate the 150th anniversary of the birth of Aichi Prefecture.

Five planes flew around while drawing lines like circles or a big heart and so on.

Unfortunately, it was a cloudy day and thus these white lines didn’t stand out.

残念ですね。

There were many beautiful a rehearsal day’s photos on SNS because it was morethat day was sunnyier.

It was a shame, but it was a good experience.

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息子の嫁の家族も愛知県に住んでいます。ニュースを教えてくれてありがとうございました。上手にかけています。

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milkyway

Dec. 3, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Air Show


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I live in Aichi Prefecture.


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Last Saturday, I went to see an air show that held to commemorate


the 150th anniversary of the birth of Aichi Prefecture.


Five planes flew around while drawing lines like circles or a big heart and so on.


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Unfortunately, it was a cloudy thus these white lines did’t stand out.


Unfortunately, it was a cloudy day and thus these white lines didn’t stand out.

残念ですね。

There were many beautiful a rehearsal day’s photos on SNS because it was more sunny.


There were many beautiful a rehearsal day’s photos on SNS because it was morethat day was sunnyier.

It was a shame, but it was a good experience.


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Last Saturday, I went to see an air show that held to commemorate the 150th anniversary of the birth of Aichi Prefecture.


Last Saturday, I went to see an air show that was held to commemorate the 150th anniversary of the birth of Aichi Prefecture.

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