Oct. 17, 2020
Agriculture Products Trade Fair
In autumn, our province will hold an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend the fair for work reasons. Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agriculture is hard to do; farmers are hard to be, and it is difficult to make money as a farmer. I don't know if it is the same situation in other countries. Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true. I don't know why this is the case. Maybe there are many things in the world like that. They are just mysteries and you never figure them out.
IEvery year in autumn, our province will holds an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend ithe fair for work reasons.
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Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who dowork on it can easily become rich, but the opposite is true.
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Agricultureal Products Trade Fair
InEvery autumn, our province will holds an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I willand I attend the fair for work reasons.
Since this happens every year I changed it to present tense.
Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agriculture is hard to do; farmers are hard to be, and it is difficult to make money as a farmer.
I don't know if it is the same situation in other countries.
Literally, the basicmost fundamental industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true.
I think you wanted to express how important and necessary the industry is, so I used the word "fundamental."
I see what you were trying to say with "basic" but in this case it comes off as a "simple" industry
I don't know why this is the case.
Maybe there are many things in the world like that.
They are just mysteries and you never figure them out.
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Great writing!
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In autumn, our province will hold an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend the fair for work reasons.
Since this happens every year I changed it to present tense.
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Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true. Literally, the I think you wanted to express how important and necessary the industry is, so I used the word "fundamental." I see what you were trying to say with "basic" but in this case it comes off as a "simple" industry Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who |
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I don't know why this is the case. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe there are many things in the world like that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are just mysteries and you never figure them out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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