Oct. 17, 2020
Agricultural products trade meeting of Anhui Province
I am on my way to Anhui Province agricultural products trading meeting. The meeting is held once every year in the capital city Hefei. During the meeting, famous and quality agricultural products from sixteen prefecture level cities were gathered, and some agricultural relative departments or companies of the whole province would visit the meeting for showing, learning and sharing. For this meeting, we organized two classes with about 100 people who focused on fruits and vegetables attending the meeting. It will take three hours to get from our city to Hefei. I wish for a peaceful journey for us.
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I capitalized the meeting name since it is a proper noun (in addition to the American English title case convention). https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/capitalization/title-case
I am on my way to Anhui Province afor the Agricultural pProducts tTrading me Meeting.
The meeting is held once every year in the capital city Hefei.
During the meeting, famous and high quality agricultural products from sixteen prefecture level cities weare gathered, and some agricultural relative departments orand companies ofrom all over the whole province would visit the meeting for showing, learning and sharing.
FIn preparation for this meeting, we organized two classes withfor about 100 people whothat focused on fruits and vegetables for those attending the meeting.
I don’t understand this sentence. Did you prepare lesson plans to run two classes at this convention?
Since the classes are what “focused on” fruits and vegetables, I changed who -> that.
It will take three hours to get from our city to Hefei.
I wish for a peaceful journey for us.
The way you wrote this is correct but sounds unnatural to me. I might recommend “I wish for a peaceful journey” or “I am hoping we have a peaceful journey”
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Good writing! I hope the meeting goes well!
Oct. 17, 2020
FIn preparation for this meeting, we organized two classes withfor about 100 people whothat focused on fruits and vegetables for those attending the meeting.
We organize two classes to attend the meeting because our work unit ( an public institution of our county ) is responsible for agricultural training for our whole county. one class learn fruits plant technology, another class learn vegetable plant technology (about 100 people in total)
Oct. 17, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and suggestions. Thank you very much.
Oct. 17, 2020
Those sound like interesting classes!
AThe agricultural products trade meeting oftrade fair in the Anhui Province
I am on my way to the Anhui Province agricultural products trading meetingtrade fair.
The meetingtrade fair is held once everya year in the capital city of Hefei.
During the meetingtrade fair, famous and quality agricultural products from sixteen prefecture level cities weare gathered, and some a. Agricultural relative departments orand companies of the whole province would visit the meeting forfrom across the province attend the trade fair to showing, learning about and sharinge these products.
I have used the present tense because this trade fair happens every year and probably follows a similar format each time.
For this meeting, wWe have organized two classes withgroups of abroutnd 100 people who are focused on the fruits and vegetables attending the meetingthat will be at the trade fair.
I hope I understood the sense of this sentence.
It will take three hours to get from our city to Hefei.
I wish for a peaceful journey for ushope we have a safe and enjoyable trip.
This sentence just sounds a little more authentically English.
Oct. 17, 2020
Great job, by the way!
Oct. 17, 2020
For this meeting, wWe have organized two classes withgroups of abroutnd 100 people who are focused on the fruits and vegetables attending the meetingthat will be at the trade fair.
Our work unit is an public institution which are responsible for our whole county. We are holding two classes, one is fruits planting technology training, another is vegetable planting technology training. When the meeting opens, we are required to take our training classes to the meeting for visiting and learning. Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
Oct. 17, 2020
I see! Then perhaps: "We have prepared two training sessions for the trade fair, one on fruit production technology and one on vegetable production technology, which will each be attended by around 100 people."
I hope that helps! Have fun at the trade fair!
Oct. 17, 2020
Thank you for your teaching. Thank you very much.
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Agricultural products trade meeting of Anhui Province
The Agricultural I capitalized the meeting name since it is a proper noun (in addition to the American English title case convention). https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/capitalization/title-case |
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I am on my way to Anhui Province agricultural products trading meeting. I am on my way to the Anhui Province agricultural I am on my way to Anhui Province |
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The meeting is held once every year in the capital city Hefei. The This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During the meeting, famous and quality agricultural products from sixteen prefecture level cities were gathered, and some agricultural relative departments or companies of the whole province would visit the meeting for showing, learning and sharing. During the I have used the present tense because this trade fair happens every year and probably follows a similar format each time. During the meeting, famous and high quality agricultural products from sixteen prefecture level cities |
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For this meeting, we organized two classes with about 100 people who focused on fruits and vegetables attending the meeting.
I hope I understood the sense of this sentence.
I don’t understand this sentence. Did you prepare lesson plans to run two classes at this convention? Since the classes are what “focused on” fruits and vegetables, I changed who -> that. |
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It will take three hours to get from our city to Hefei. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wish for a peaceful journey for us. I This sentence just sounds a little more authentically English. I wish for a peaceful journey for us. The way you wrote this is correct but sounds unnatural to me. I might recommend “I wish for a peaceful journey” or “I am hoping we have a peaceful journey” |
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