Dec. 17, 2020
Again and again...
I've been learning English, again and again, with the firm intention that one day I'll be as fluent as a native. Is my dream too big? I set out a long and schizophrenic way, on which I am swung by hopes and doubts. I keep thinking positively, meditating, visualizing my ambitions to make them a reality. I use to have weeks 'with' and weeks 'without'. Sometimes, words do not come out, and I feel that the only place I am progressing is in my head. I can talk to myself in English for hours, with the right words, the right syntax, a better pronunciation. It is an ecstatic feeling, that fills my hopes. I'd love to be confident enough to speak loudly and publicly the same way I talk to myself. I used to be so handy with words in French, allowing me to articulate complex ideas, excel in problem-solving, and now, I feel being the dumbest people in the room. Not having enough words constrains my thought process. Am I sound daunting? Yeah, I prefer to think that it is part of the learning process, I prefer to think that I am a Tortoise that will meet the Hare at the end of the race. I needed to share these thoughts with you guys. Maybe one of you will feel me :) Thank you in advance for the correction, and if it rings a bell to you, do not hesitate to comment!
Again and again...
I've been learning English, again and againfor a long time, with the firm intention that one day I'll be as fluent as a native.
'again and again' would suggest you have tried learning it on multiple occasions. If that is what you mean then you can leave it as is.
Is my dream too big?
I set out on a long and schizophrenic wajourney, on which I am swuing byfrom hopes and to doubts.
I am swung by hopes and doubts does not really make sense. Could alternatively say 'I am filled with hopes and doubts.'
I keep thinking positively, meditating, visualizing my ambitions toso I can make them a reality.
I used to have weeks 'with' and weeks 'without'.
Past tense here.
Sometimes, words do not come out, and I feel that the only place I am progressing is in my head.
I can talk to myself in English for hours, with the right words, the right syntax, a betterthe correct pronunciation.
or maybe just ', better pronunciation' if you want to suggest better but not perfect.
It is an ecstatic feeling, that fillraises my hopes.
'raises my hopes' to suggest you are more hopeful or alternatively 'fills me with hope'
I'd love to be confident enough to speak loudly and publicly the same way I talk to myself.
I used to be so handy with words in French, abllowing me to articulate complex ideas, excel in problem-solving, and now, I feel beingI am the dumbest peoplerson in the room.
There is one of you 'people' is plural.
You can be 'one of the dumbest people in the room' alternatively.
Not having enough words constrains my thought process.
AmDo I sound dauntinged?
or 'Does that sound daunting?'
you are daunted
or
something (else) is daunting (to you)
Yeah, I prefer to think that it is part of the learning process, I prefer to think that I am a Tortoise that will meet the Hare at the end of the race.
I needed to share these thoughts with you guys, as maybe some of you will feel for me.
Thank you in advance for the correction, and if it rings a bell tofor you, do not hesitate to comment!
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Dec. 19, 2020
Thank you very much for the explanations. Crystal clear :)
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Again and again... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've been learning English, again and again, with the firm intention that one day I'll be as fluent as a native. I've been learning English, 'again and again' would suggest you have tried learning it on multiple occasions. If that is what you mean then you can leave it as is. |
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Is my dream too big? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I set out a long and schizophrenic way, on which I am swung by hopes and doubts. I set out on a long and schizophrenic I am swung by hopes and doubts does not really make sense. Could alternatively say 'I am filled with hopes and doubts.' |
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I keep thinking positively, meditating, visualizing my ambitions to make them a reality. I keep thinking positively, meditating, visualizing my ambitions |
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I use to have weeks 'with' and weeks 'without'. I used to have weeks 'with' and weeks 'without'. Past tense here. |
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Sometimes, words do not come out, and I feel that the only place I am progressing is in my head. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can talk to myself in English for hours, with the right words, the right syntax, a better pronunciation. I can talk to myself in English for hours, with the right words, the right syntax, or maybe just ', better pronunciation' if you want to suggest better but not perfect. |
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It is an ecstatic feeling, that fills my hopes. It is an ecstatic feeling, that 'raises my hopes' to suggest you are more hopeful or alternatively 'fills me with hope' |
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I'd love to be confident enough to speak loudly and publicly the same way I talk to myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to be so handy with words in French, allowing me to articulate complex ideas, excel in problem-solving, and now, I feel being the dumbest people in the room. I used to be so handy with words in French, abl There is one of you 'people' is plural. You can be 'one of the dumbest people in the room' alternatively. |
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Not having enough words constrains my thought process. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Am I sound daunting?
or 'Does that sound daunting?' you are daunted or something (else) is daunting (to you) |
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Yeah, I prefer to think that it is part of the learning process, I prefer to think that I am a Tortoise that will meet the Hare at the end of the race. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I needed to share these thoughts with you guys, as maybe some of you will feel me. I needed to share these thoughts with you guys, as maybe some of you will feel for me. |
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Thank you in advance for the correction, and if it rings a bell to you, do not hesitate to comment! Thank you in advance for the correction, and if it rings a bell |
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I needed to share these thoughts with you guys, as maybe one of you will feel me. |
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I needed to share these thoughts with you guys. |
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Maybe one of you will feel me :) Thank you in advance for the correction, and if it rings a bell to you, do not hesitate to comment! |
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