What Motivates meMe to Learning English What Motivates Me to Learn English

What Motivates meMe to Learning English What Motivates Me to Learn English

I still remember in that saddening room with a disinfectant scent, a soul, confined in the only space where he could do nonething other than complaining, was extremely unhappy toward every person around him and began to seek a way in lighting the last hope for living. I still remember in that saddening room with a disinfectant scent, a soul, confined in the only space where he could do nothing other than complain, was extremely unhappy toward every person around him and began to seek a way in lighting the last hope for living.

I still remember in that saddening room with a disinfectant scent, a soul,a soul in a sad room with the scent of disinfectant confined in the only space where he could do nonething other than complaining, was extremely unhappy toward every person around him and began to seek a way in lighniting the last hope for living. I still remember a soul in a sad room with the scent of disinfectant confined in the only space where he could do nothing other than complain, was extremely unhappy toward every person around him and began to seek a way in igniting the last hope for living.

Should I have taken everything easy, aA person without any positive expectations for the future, who was tired of typical Chinese schooling and bothered by 7/24/7 surveillance from parents, was me and is still part of me now. A person without any positive expectations for the future, who was tired of typical Chinese schooling and bothered by 24/7 surveillance from parents, was me and is still part of me now.

This sentence was a little odd to read and say, so I took out the beginning part. I believe it's because it was too long and in the passive voice. Judging from the rest of your entry, I would say this is a stylistic choice, but I would be careful when choosing to do so. Hopefully by doing this, I didn't take out too much of the poetic style.

Should I have taken everything easy,the easy way out, I would've been a person without any positive expectations for the future, who was tired of typical Chinese schooling and bothered by 7/24/7 surveillance from parents, was me and isand these are still a part of me now. Should I have taken the easy way out, I would've been a person without any positive expectations for the future, who was tired of typical Chinese schooling and bothered by 24/7 surveillance from parents, and these are still a part of me now.

I know in China, a sole of one’s will can’t change a thing around him, at least, not that much, but in this golden era of the Internet, without living abroad one can certainly access an innumerable amount of information online,; be it music, videos, podcasts or e-books. I know in China, a sole of one’s will can’t change a thing around him, at least, not that much, but in this golden era of the Internet, without living abroad one can certainly access an innumerable amount of information online; be it music, videos, podcasts or e-books.

I know in China, a sole of one’ingle person's will can’t change a thing around him, at least, not that much, anyway, but in this golden era of the Internet, without living abroad one can certainly access innumerable amounts of information online, be it music, videos, podcasts or e-books. I know in China, a single person's will can’t change a thing around him, at least, not that much, anyway, but in this golden era of the Internet, without living abroad one can access innumerable amounts of information online, be it music, videos, podcasts or e-books.

Try to consume anything in another language besidesinstead of maintaining necessary interaction with people in real life. Try to consume anything in another language instead of maintaining necessary interaction with people in real life.

Try to consume anything in another language besidesin addition to maintaining necessary interaction with people in real life. Try to consume anything in another language in addition to maintaining necessary interaction with people in real life.

This, I would say, is one of the best ways to escape from meaningless social media, and is a means to stay less infected by negative people around me, not. I do this not only because it makes me happy, but because it also comforts me. This, I would say, is one of the best ways to escape from meaningless social media, and is a means to stay less infected by negative people around me. I do this not only because it makes me happy, but because it also comforts me.

This sentence needed to be broken into two because the latter part is reinforcing your point. It reads better if they are in separate sentences.

This, I would say, is one of the best ways to escape from meaningless social media, and is also a means to stay less infected bylimit infection by the negative people around me, not only because it makes me happy but because it also comforts me. This, I would say, is one of the best ways to escape from meaningless social media, and is also a means to limit infection by the negative people around me, not only because it makes me happy but because it also comforts me.

If you ask me what makes me never give up on learning, though you may not get the answer as expected answer, there is only one reason — — I get happier when I am exploring and absorbing something new, like an adventurer. If you ask me what makes me never give up on learning, though you may not get the expected answer, there is only one reason — I get happier when I am exploring and absorbing something new, like an adventurer.

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If you ask me what makes me never give up on learning, though you may not get the answer asyou expected, there is only one reason — — I get happier when I am exploring and absorbing something new, like an adventurer. If you ask me what makes me never give up on learning, though you may not get the answer you expect, there is only one reason — — I get happier when I am exploring and absorbing something new, like an adventurer.

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Not on all of the occasions, but close toAbout 99% of them time, I willould say I play with enjoyingenjoy playing around instead of studying with resentingment. About 99% of the time, I would say I enjoy playing around instead of studying with resentment.

"About __% of the time" is a more concise phrase to say what you wanted to get across.

Not on all of the occasionstime, but close to 99% of them, I will say I play with enjoyingment instead of study with resentingment. Not all the time, but close to 99% of them, I will say I play with enjoyment instead of study with resentment.

I learn what I like and I like what I learn or, more precisely, I play with what I like and I like what I play with. I learn what I like and I like what I learn or, more precisely, I play with what I like and I like what I play with.