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alexwong2164

May 28, 2021

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When young meet old!

To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends from internet.

Danger? Sure 100%.

Today I made a new female friend.

She send me a video about how to distinguish man’s intention.

Whether he is really wants to learning or just try to tease woman.

I watched the video. (ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)

It has some good points but I give her a lesson.

You should protect yourself.

But you should take the risk trust that I am a safe person.

The more trust on me the more you can explore.

Because I am doing the same to you.

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Today I made a new female friend.

I watched the video.

(ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)

You should protect yourself.

When young meet old!


When young meets old! When young meets old!

To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends from internet.


To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends fromon the internet. To improve my Japanese I am always making new friends on the internet.

Danger?


Danger? Danger?

This a technically incorrect sentence fragment but it's okay in informal writing.

Sure 100%.


Sure 100%. Sure 100%.

Same as above.

Today I made a new female friend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She send me a video about how to distinguish man’s intention.


She sendt me a video about how to distinguish a man’s intention. She sent me a video about how to distinguish a man’s intention.

Whether he is really wants to learning or just try to tease woman.


Whether he is really wantstrying to learning or just trywants to tease a woman. Whether he is really trying to learn or just wants to tease a woman.

I watched the video.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(ナンパ目的のユーザーの見極め方)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It has some good points but I give her a lesson.


It has some good points but I give her a lessonalso gave her some advice. It has some good points but I also gave her some advice.

You should protect yourself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But you should take the risk trust that I am a safe person.


But you should take the risk and trust that I am a safe person. But you should take the risk and trust that I am a safe person.

The more trust on me the more you can explore.


The more you trust on me the more you can explore. The more you trust me the more you can explore.

Because I am doing the same to you.


Because I am doing the same towith you. Because I am doing the same with you.

"Doing something to someone" makes it sound like that something is bad.

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